文如下：In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li

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文如下：Inthelastfewyears,IthinkIchangedalot.WhenIwasaprimaryschool''sstudent,afterclassoverIusedtogorigh

文如下：In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li
文如下：
In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary
school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do my
homework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would like to do some sports,then go home.And these days I don't play computer games,I feel it's boring.
I'm interested in doing some reading.
麻烦把写错的地方和不好的地方指出来

文如下：In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li
I think I've changed a lot in the last few years.When I was a primary school student,I used to go right home and do my homework quickly after class.Then i played computer games until my mother got back.Now,I'd like to do some sports after the class is over and then go home.And these days,I don't play computer games any longer,because i feel it's boring.I'm interested in doing some reading now.
in the last few years要用现在完成时态,
when the class over缺少动词

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我调整了下一些短句的顺序，为的是使文章更具连贯性；有些地方在保持原文意思的情况下作了些修改，望见谅。你看看有什么地方还不是很好的，可以给我留言。
I think I’ve changed a lot in the last few years. When I was a primary school's student, I used to go back home to do my homework as quickly as possible. And then I played computer games until my mother came back. But now, I would like to do some sports before coming back. However, these days I don't play computer games any more, because I feel it's boring. Now,I'm interested in doing some readings.

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In the last few years,I thought I changed a lot.
I used to go rigt home and did my homework . Then I playde computer games until my mother got back 这是语法错误应是not...until until不能单独使用 And these days I can't play computer games,so I feel it's boring.
总共三个错误吧

in the last few in the last few years是什么时态 1 on the last few day 还是in the last few day（s）还是on the last few days in the last few years还是in the last few yearRT in the last few days为什么用last? in the past few years 过去完成时 in the last few years 现在完成时 in the past 一般过去时 for the last few years和 in the last few years的区别 i'd had reson enough in the last few months.如何理解last?如何理解few? in the last few years 为什么要加 the in the last few years=over the years吗 in the past few years和in the last few years的区别, in the last few days 和 in the past few days 是否可以互相替换? the last few over the last few in the last few years 用什么时态 in the last few years 有在最近几年里 in the last few years 造句急需啊! In the last few years my life_____(change) a lot.