Dear editor:Dear editor:I have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I fI have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I found many people complain that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisureful than in the pas

Dear editor:Dear editor:I have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I fI have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I found many people complain that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisureful than in the pas
Dear editor:Dear editor:I have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I f
I have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I found many people complain that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisureful than in the past.I think the causes of the problems should all blame to the developing of social
the progress of technology make our work more efficient and more less labourious.In the past.industry producting requaired most basically famillar skills and simple knownlege .but nowadays demand people must with high skills high degree between the colleagues are inexistence help each other.just only exist "each trying to cheat the other" this is a very realistic socialty as a saying goes "the survival of the fittest .unwell will be eliminated" therefor the stress and unsatified be produced of itsself.somebody said that transfor stress to activity" actully all is pettifogging
for example one's worry about security excert great technology .If someone work with stress so the company not only lost the money but also lost a lot of talents
firstly people's daily life will make great influence .they stay the nervous environment all day and they havn't any mood to do other things they have the irregular life
老师这是一篇报纸上报道写给编辑的关于日常工作给人造成的影响还要举例说明我写的不是很完整请您批阅我就是还没搞清什么时候该用定语从句

Dear editor:Dear editor:I have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I fI have just read the inviting pulic comment on the newspaper.I found many people complain that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisureful than in the pas
【修改后的英语作文】
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. I'd like to bring about my comment on the issue.
I have just read the notice in your newspaper that invites pulic comment on the pressure of people's daily life. I have found many people complain that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisureful than in the past. I think the causes of the problems can be attributed to social development.
The progress of technology makes our work more efficient and more less labourious. In the past, industry producting required most basically famillar skills and simple knowledge, but nowadays demands that people should have high skills and high degrees. And the relationship between the colleagues is no longer helping or being helped, only one trying to cheat or outwit the other. As long as you are let down at any time you may be out. This society is very practical. "The fittest survives, and the opposite is eliminated", so pressure and complaints arise spontaneously. Somebody considers "pressure as the driving force", which is his own comfort and it is deceptive. It is only to constantly struggle to survive.
For example, one's worry about security excerts great technology. If someone works with stress, the company will not only lose the money but also lose a lot of talents.
Firstly, people's daily life will make great influence. They stay in the nervous environment all day and they havn't any mood to do other things, so they live an irregular life.
【翻译】
我刚刚读了你们报纸,关于邀请公众评论人们的日常生活压力的通知.我发现有很多人抱怨现在的工作压力比以前更大,休闲更少.我认为问题的原因可以归因于社会发展.
技术的进步使我们的工作更高效、更省力.在过去,工业生产需要熟练的、简单的基本技能和知识,但现在要求人们要有高技能和高文化程度.同事间的关系不再是帮助或被帮助,只有尔虞我诈.只要你一掉以轻心随时都有可能被out,这个社会很现实,“适者生存不适者淘汰”,压力与抱怨就油然而生了.有人劝说“化压力为动力”这都是自我安慰和骗人的,只有为了生存不断拼搏向上.
例如,一个是担心安全发挥重大技术.如果一个人工作有压力,公司不仅将失去金钱,也会失去了许多人才.
首先,人们的日常生活都会产生重要影响.他们每天处在在紧张环境中,他们没有任何情绪做其他事情,所以他们过着一个不规律的生活.

（刘老师 解答）