短文改错great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each otherform a long distance.in the past,people writr latters to exchange informations with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telepho

短文改错great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each otherform a long distance.in the past,people writr latters to exchange informations with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telepho
短文改错great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each other
form a long distance.in the past,people writr latters to exchange informations with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telephone.now more and more people use our own mobile phones to communicate and instead writing on paper ,they e-mail each other through the internet .under the help of the 3g technology,some even talk to face.as a result,people find that quicker and easier to communicate,or at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing.and the relationship between each nother is not so closer as before

短文改错great changes have been taken place in the way people communicate with each otherform a long distance.in the past,people writr latters to exchange informations with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telepho
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great changes have (去掉been) taken place in the way people communicate with each other from a long distance.in the past,people (wrote) letters to exchange (information) with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the (fixed) telephone.now more and more people use (their) own mobile phones to communicate and instead (加入of) writing on paper,they e-mail each other through the internet.(With) the help of the 3g technology,some even talk (加入face) to face.as a result,people find (it) quicker and easier to communicate,(But) at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing.and the relationship between each other is not so (close) as before.

for a long distance. in the past,people write latters to exchange information with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telephone.now more and more people use their own mo...

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for a long distance. in the past,people write latters to exchange information with each other.later on,they could talk with each other on the fixing telephone.now more and more people use their own mobile phones to communicate and instead of writing on paper ,they e-mail each other through the internet .with the help of the 3g technology,some even talk to face.as a result,people find that more quickly and more easilyr to communicate,or at the same time some people feel that they become poorer in writing.and the relationship between each other is not so close as before

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