I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,make me happy.And they are cute ,let me herrt worm enough.The reason of two is I want to tanch many children ,it is great.I believe

I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,make me happy.And they are cute ,let me herrt worm enough.The reason of two is I want to tanch many children ,it is great.I believe
I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,make me happy.And they are cute ,let me herrt worm enough.The reason of two is I want to tanch many children ,it is great.I believe one day my students can be everywhere!Now I must study hard for my dream.
帮我修改一篇英语小短文~这是我一个朋友提问得到的.我看了总觉得有哪里貌似不对..
为什么你们的回答都不一样呢?

I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,make me happy.And they are cute ,let me herrt worm enough.The reason of two is I want to tanch many children ,it is great.I believe
I think being a teacher is my dream!The reason is I like children very much,in my opinion,their smile is very beautiful,which make me happy.And they are cute ,let my heart feel warm .The second reason is I want to teach many children ,it is great!I believe one day my students can go everywhere!Now I must study hard for my dream.
这样应该就可以了
出现了一些中国式英语,注意以下

I think being a teacher is my favorite work! The reason is that I like children very much. Their smile is beautiful, and it makes me happy. They are cute, and makes me feel warm. The second reason is ...

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I think being a teacher is my favorite work! The reason is that I like children very much. Their smile is beautiful, and it makes me happy. They are cute, and makes me feel warm. The second reason is that I want to teach many children. It is great. Because I believe one day my student can be everywhere！Now I must study hard to realize my dream

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I think to be a teacher is my favorite job! One of the reasons is I like children very much. Their smile is very beautiful,making me happy always. And they are cute, letting my heart worm enough. Anot...

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I think to be a teacher is my favorite job! One of the reasons is I like children very much. Their smile is very beautiful,making me happy always. And they are cute, letting my heart worm enough. Another reason is I want to teach many children, and it is great.I believe one day my students can be everywhere! Now I must study hard for my dream.

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I think to be a teacher is my favorite work! One of the several reasons is that I like children very much,their smiles are very beautiful,which give me joy.And they are cute ,and fill me with warm ...

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I think to be a teacher is my favorite work! One of the several reasons is that I like children very much,their smiles are very beautiful,which give me joy.And they are cute ,and fill me with warm feeling. The second reason is that I want to teach many children .I believe one day my students can be everywhere!Now I must study hard to realize my dream.

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i think be a teacher is my favorite work(job)!The reason of one(one of the reason) is I like children(child) very much,their smile is very beautiful(wonderful),make me happy.And they are cute ,let(ma...

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i think be a teacher is my favorite work(job)!The reason of one(one of the reason) is I like children(child) very much,their smile is very beautiful(wonderful),make me happy.And they are cute ,let(make) me(my) herrt worm(feel comfort) enough(去掉). The reason of two（the second reason） is I want to tanch(teach) many children ,it is great.I believe one day my students can be (加上in)everywhere!Now I must(have to ) study hard for my dream(and make my dream come true)
我个人认为，你的中式语法太多，再次注意词性。还有其他问题，在我百度上留言吧

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