英语翻译我叫陈雪冰，我的英文名叫Clinla，我来自江苏省南京市，我是一名中学生，我来到美国，是因为我喜欢这个国家，这个国家很发达，可以让我的理想得以实现，我在英语方面很贫乏

英语翻译我叫陈雪冰，我的英文名叫Clinla，我来自江苏省南京市，我是一名中学生，我来到美国，是因为我喜欢这个国家，这个国家很发达，可以让我的理想得以实现，我在英语方面很贫乏
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我叫陈雪冰，我的英文名叫Clinla，我来自江苏省南京市，我是一名中学生，我来到美国，是因为我喜欢这个国家，这个国家很发达，可以让我的理想得以实现，我在英语方面很贫乏，不过我会提高自己的英语通过我的努力来实现，在课余时间，我通常做一些我喜欢的业余爱好，比如说：游泳，登山，羽毛球...我不能将自己的性格描述的很全面，我是一个外向的人，我喜欢跟别人交朋友，我可以跟每个人将心比心，但是有的时候我也希望可以一个人呆在一起，有时候我希望我可以一个人静静地看书，听音乐，做一些运动，我希望可以到贵校上学，我相信自己有一定的管理才能，我希望老师们可以看到我努力，来判断我是否可以做班长，我会跟同学们打成一片，但是我会对每个同学的学习状况都很严格，同样也包括我自己。

英语翻译我叫陈雪冰，我的英文名叫Clinla，我来自江苏省南京市，我是一名中学生，我来到美国，是因为我喜欢这个国家，这个国家很发达，可以让我的理想得以实现，我在英语方面很贫乏
翻译什么 My name is Xue Bing Chen,my English name Clinla,I am from Nanjing,Jiangsu Province,I was a middle school student,I came to the United States,because I love this country,this country is very developed,you can let my ideal realized,I am very poor in English,but I will improve your English through my efforts to achieve that in outside school hours,I usually do some of my favorite hobbies,such as:swimming,climbing,badminton ...I can not own character described in the very comprehensive,I am an outgoing person,I like to make friends with other people,I can tell everyone Care,but sometimes I also hope that we can stay with a person,and sometimes I wish I could a person quietly reading,listening to music,do some exercise,I hope can go to your school to school,I believe they have a certain degree of management skills,I hope that teachers can see my efforts to determine whether I can do squad leader,I will mix with the students,but I will study the situation of each student are very strict,also including myself

I am Chen Xuebing and my English name is Clinla. I am a middle school student from Jiangsu province. I come to America because I love this country. It is well developed, which may help me to realize m...

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I am Chen Xuebing and my English name is Clinla. I am a middle school student from Jiangsu province. I come to America because I love this country. It is well developed, which may help me to realize my dream. My English is very poor, but I will improve my English through my own efforts. In my spare time, I often do something according to my hobbies, such as swimming, climbing and playing badminton,etc. It is hard for me to describe my personality. Sometimes, I am extrovert, and I like make friends with others. I am willing to stay close with them. Nevertheless, sometimes I hope to stay alone, reading books or listening to music or doing sports. I hope that I could come to your school. I believe that I am capable of management. I hope that teachers could witness my efforts and judge whether I could be a headmaster. I will build up good relations with my classmates. Still, I will be strict with every classmate's studing, including myself.

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Questions added:My name is Xue-Bing Chen, my English name Clinla, I am from Nanjing, Jiangsu Province, I was a middle school student, I came to the United States, because I love this country, this cou...

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Questions added:My name is Xue-Bing Chen, my English name Clinla, I am from Nanjing, Jiangsu Province, I was a middle school student, I came to the United States, because I love this country, this country is very developed, you can let my ideal realized, I am very poor in English, but I will improve your English through my efforts to achieve that in outside school hours, I usually do some of my favorite hobbies, such as: swimming, climbing, badminton ... I can not own character described in the very comprehensive, I am an outgoing person, I like to make friends with other people, I can tell everyone Care, but sometimes I also hope that we can stay with a person, and sometimes I wish I could a person quietly reading, listening to music, do some exercise, I hope can go to your school to school, I believe they have a certain degree of management skills, I hope that teachers can see my efforts to determine whether I can do squad leader, I will mix with the students, but I will study the situation of each student are very strict, also including myself.
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2楼翻译的可以，但是有些地方会让人感觉award&wired......
比如第二行的it is well developed ，感觉很怪，改成it is well-developed是不是更好些呢？It is hard for me to describe my personality这一句感觉怪怪的，后面考虑是否加个comprehensive，把for me也去掉。第四行In my s...

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2楼翻译的可以，但是有些地方会让人感觉award&wired......
比如第二行的it is well developed ，感觉很怪，改成it is well-developed是不是更好些呢？It is hard for me to describe my personality这一句感觉怪怪的，后面考虑是否加个comprehensive，把for me也去掉。第四行In my spare time，改成In leisure time，感觉更好些。另外倒数第三行用witness不太好，这个一般用目击者的意思。改成see（see不仅仅是看到的意思，还有明白，了解的意思）比较好，另外headmaster是校长的意思，squad leader是班长的意思。还是倒数第三行，judge，意思多用于判决，裁判，用在这里有些不妥，用determine吧。
总起来说翻译的很棒！
另外我加一句，鄙视翻译器。

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