英语翻译Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of ph

英语翻译Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of ph
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Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of photos.During the holiday I most often do is take pictures,where the scenery is very beautiful.I am back in July 8th.I had a wonderful summer vacation.
【PS：我写的~我怕语句不通顺,特地找人翻译~亲语句不通顺的地方告诉我怎么改~】

英语翻译Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of ph
Summer I went to Shandong,I was in July 1st.That is my hometown,my parents are going to see Grandpa and grandma.We ride in a car,get there.Where we live,Grandpa's home,it is very comfortable.I also visited Qingdao,where I took a lot of photos.During the holiday I most often do is take pictures,where the scenery is very beautiful.I am back in July 8th.I had a wonderful summer vacation.
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When on summer holiday,I went to my homtown,shandong on 1st July.we went there by car to see grandparents with my parents.it made us so comfortable.在暑假的7月1号我和父母去了我的老家山东探望爷爷奶奶,这一行使我们感到很舒适
And then,I visited qingdao and took a lot of photos.The scenery is very beautiful,so what I do mostly in this holiday was taking pictures.然后,我们又去了青岛,因为景色很美,所以大部分时间我都是在拍照.
At last,we came back on 8th July,it was an exciting wonderful summer vacation.最后,我们在7月8号回家了,这真是一个兴奋而又棒极了的假期啊!
希望对你有用.你自己也要试着去写,理顺了语句.慢慢来.老是依靠网络也不是一件好事.至少是对你的学习

I went to Shandong on the 1st of July it was during the summer. That is my hometown, my parents were going to visit my grandparents. We went there by car and we lived in my grandfather's house, it is ...

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I went to Shandong on the 1st of July it was during the summer. That is my hometown, my parents were going to visit my grandparents. We went there by car and we lived in my grandfather's house, it is very comfortable. I also visited Qingdao where I took a lot of photos. I took photos very often during the holidays because the scenery is very beautiful. I was back on the 8th of July. I had a wonderful summer vacation.
替你修改了 :)

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夏天，我去了山东，我是在7月1日去的。这是我的家乡，我的父母要见爷爷和奶奶。我们坐在车上，到达那里。我们住的地方，爷爷的家，这是非常舒适的。我还参观了青岛，在那里我拍了很多照片。假日期间，我最常做的是拍照，那里的风景很漂亮。我回来于7月8日。我有一个美好的暑假。真的~我没有语句不通顺？亲一定要提出来，不然我会被老师骂死的~（PS：想要的追分？）你写的很好。不用担心。...

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夏天，我去了山东，我是在7月1日去的。这是我的家乡，我的父母要见爷爷和奶奶。我们坐在车上，到达那里。我们住的地方，爷爷的家，这是非常舒适的。我还参观了青岛，在那里我拍了很多照片。假日期间，我最常做的是拍照，那里的风景很漂亮。我回来于7月8日。我有一个美好的暑假。

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到处都是中式英语，我真不知道楼上那些人怎么回答的。。。
On July 1st, My parents and I drove to our hometown, Shangdong, to see my grandparents. We spent some days in my grandparents’ house which was very comfortable. After ...

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到处都是中式英语，我真不知道楼上那些人怎么回答的。。。
On July 1st, My parents and I drove to our hometown, Shangdong, to see my grandparents. We spent some days in my grandparents’ house which was very comfortable. After visiting my grandparents, we also toured Qingdao. WE took lots of photos there and that’s what I did mostly during the holiday, because thesceneryis toobeautiful. We got home on July 8th. That’s really a wonderful summer vacation.

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This summer I went to Shandong on July 1st. That is my hometown, and my parents were going to see my grandpa and my grandma. We rode in a car to get there. The place we stayed, my grandpa's house, is ...

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This summer I went to Shandong on July 1st. That is my hometown, and my parents were going to see my grandpa and my grandma. We rode in a car to get there. The place we stayed, my grandpa's house, is very comfortable. I also visited Qingdao, where I took a lot of photos. During the holiday, what I most often do is taking photos, as the scenery in my hometown and Qingdao is very beautiful. I am back on July 8th. I had a wonderful summer vacation.
给你几点建议：
1. 给你翻译的人水平太低，基本就不会英语，这种人以后不要找他（她），误人子弟。
2. 想学好英语，自己努力，从基础知识学起，没有捷径。
3. 我没有看到你的汉语写的是什么，也不知道你要表达什么，但是仅就英语表达来说，条理比较差，表达的意思分散，效果不好。

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第一句就诡异……别吓我。想整篇改。
第一句：I went to Shandong on July 1st in summer. Shandong is my hometown and I am going to see my grandpa and grandma with my parents. We get there by car. The place my grandparents...

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第一句就诡异……别吓我。想整篇改。
第一句：I went to Shandong on July 1st in summer. Shandong is my hometown and I am going to see my grandpa and grandma with my parents. We get there by car. The place my grandparents live is very comfortabl. I also visited Qingdao and took a lot of photos there. The most common thing I did during the holiday is taking photos of the scenic spots. I came back home on July 8th and I really enjoyed myself during the summer holiday.
请问你是几年级啊……别用百度翻译了，自己再怎么乱翻也不会语法成这副样子。

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