请英语高手帮我看一段英文,请您指正出错误Sorry to disturb you,here is a question need your confirmation.About the function of ECU of DALIAN sample engines.DALIAN needs ECU has the function of safety start,that means they can start th

请英语高手帮我看一段英文,请您指正出错误Sorry to disturb you,here is a question need your confirmation.About the function of ECU of DALIAN sample engines.DALIAN needs ECU has the function of safety start,that means they can start th
请英语高手帮我看一段英文,请您指正出错误
Sorry to disturb you,here is a question need your confirmation.About the function of ECU of DALIAN sample engines.DALIAN needs ECU has the function of safety start,that means they can start the machine when the gear box relief,so as to protect the start motor and operate the SSL in safety condition.The electrical engineer said according to the technical data the input port E24 can be realized.Maybe this is a mis-setting in DALI after leaving factory.would you please kindly give us your confirmation?Looking forward to your information.Thank you very much.
请您指教,这是一封信函.你看看里面的表达及语气是否合适.拜谢!
我们目前发现给我们配套的发动机ECU没有设定安全起动的功能，即我们一般需要变速箱处于空档的时候才可以发动机器，这样的话对保护起动电机，也使装载机操作比较安全，我看你们给的ECU技术资料是（在E24端输入信号）能实现的，可能是DALI出厂时没有设好

请英语高手帮我看一段英文,请您指正出错误Sorry to disturb you,here is a question need your confirmation.About the function of ECU of DALIAN sample engines.DALIAN needs ECU has the function of safety start,that means they can start th
汗.有点中式英语,不是很看得懂,我试试修改下吧
Mr.
Sorry to disturb you.
Here is a question need your confirmation about the function of ECU of DALIAN sample engines.DALIAN needs ECU for safe start,which means they can start the machine when (the gear box relief)看不懂--,so as to protect the start motor and operate the SSL in safety condition.
The electrical engineer said that according to the technical data,this input port E24 could be realized.Maybe the failure resulted from mis-setting in DALI.
Would you please kindly give us your confirmation?Looking forward to your information.Thank you very much.
看了半天 不知道你要向他求证的是什么.

最好同时把中文贴出来。
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Still don't understand. Even in Chinese. But i guess this is what you want to say:
Dear Sir, I have the following questions regarding the ECU that comes with the DALIAN sam...

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最好同时把中文贴出来。
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Still don't understand. Even in Chinese. But i guess this is what you want to say:
Dear Sir, I have the following questions regarding the ECU that comes with the DALIAN sample engines. I found that the ECU motor might not be properly configured for safe start protection. Usually,for protecting the machine as well as for operation safety, the engine should only be able to be started while the gear-box is in idle position. From the technical information available, I think this safe start protection function could be realized in your ECU if properly configured by routing the input through port E24. Please confirm if I am right and whether I could make the aforementioned changes in our ECU. Thank you in advance for you for your attention.

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need改needing;about前加it is(第一行)
safety改为safe（第四行）
kindly放最后（倒数第二行）
information改为letter（最后）
语气还好