关于定语从句的语法问题The drawing vividly depicts that many people are working or playing on computers,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area.请问：1.who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area 应该

关于定语从句的语法问题The drawing vividly depicts that many people are working or playing on computers,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area.请问：1.who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area 应该
关于定语从句的语法问题
The drawing vividly depicts that many people are working or playing on computers,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area.
请问：
1.who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area 应该是非限制性定语从句,修饰many people,是吗.为什么不是跟在many people 后面?
2.可不可以改成The drawing vividly depicts that many people who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area are working or playing on computers.
或者The drawing vividly depicts that many people,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area,are working or playing on computers.

关于定语从句的语法问题The drawing vividly depicts that many people are working or playing on computers,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area.请问：1.who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area 应该
答：本题句由考研范文改编而来,因有问题,我才去找的.范文句是：
一篇考研英语的范文The drawing vividly depicts that in a circular area which can be divided into some sub-sections,there is one person in each,working or playing on a computer.
这句话,意思明确.逻辑正确.而你的这句话,是语法正确,逻辑错误的：
The drawing vividly depicts that many people are working or playing on computers,who have been divided into a small cube in a circular area.
析：原句可能是一个看图作文.意思是一幅图画中有一个环形的区域,这个区域被分成了一些较小的部分（sub-sections),在第一个小区域中（不一定是方型也不一定是圆型）都有一个人在一台电脑上工作或游戏.
而原题句中的who指many poeple,被分成小的cube“立方体”,这是不合逻辑的.
我找到的还有一个版本是：
The drawing vividly depicts that a circular area has been divided into a number of sub-sections,and there is one person in each sub-section,working or playing on a computer.

因为这个定语从句太长了，在英语中，为了避免头重脚轻，把比较长的定语从句放后面。
你所改的第一种方法是对的。也就是把一个非限定性定语从句改成了一个普通的定语从句。至于最后一种情况，我不清楚你为什么要加上两个逗号，是怕一口气读不下了吗？我就是想知道语法上有没有错？我看语法书，有这样一个句子 All these books, which had been donated by visiting...

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因为这个定语从句太长了，在英语中，为了避免头重脚轻，把比较长的定语从句放后面。
你所改的第一种方法是对的。也就是把一个非限定性定语从句改成了一个普通的定语从句。至于最后一种情况，我不清楚你为什么要加上两个逗号，是怕一口气读不下了吗？

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