以THE VIEW OF USING MOBILE PHONE IN OUR SCHOOL为题目写作文

以THE VIEW OF USING MOBILE PHONE IN OUR SCHOOL为题目写作文
以THE VIEW OF USING MOBILE PHONE IN OUR SCHOOL为题目写作文

以THE VIEW OF USING MOBILE PHONE IN OUR SCHOOL为题目写作文
楼上的：
请不要来乱评论别人写的作文
我为什么不能用 two different views?
比起只讨论一方面,我选择讨论两种观点.
还有,Issue 这个词,可以用来指很多事情.
没有谁规定只能指很大的观点.
Of 后面,也可以跟 Mobile phones
The issue of sthing
The issue of using mobile phones
The issue of mobile phones
本来就是在讨论和手机有关的事情.
又不一定要用 of using mobile phones in our school.
至于你说的“后面错的更离谱”
请你指出来,我后面哪里错了.
谢谢.
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The view of using mobile phone in our school
There are two different views on the issue of mobile phones in schools. Some believe that students should be able to use mobile phones in school because there are many advantages to doing so. For one thing, if an emergency were to occur at the school, the students would immediately be able to use their mobile phones to reach their parents and relatives. Also, if a student's parents wanted to reach the student, they can send a text message to the student as opposed to having to call the office and then getting transferred. However, there are also some who believe otherwise. If someone called in during a lesson, the ringing of the mobile phone would clearly disrupt the class, and students might be more tempted to send text message during class. Furthermore, students might use the mobile phones to cheat on exams, and this would cause many controversies. Overall, the advantages are balanced with the disadvantages, and it is ultimately the school's decision whether or not to allow mobile phones.
171个字.自己写的.
不知道这是不是你想要的?
如果太长的话,我可以改短.

P.S.,Frankly speeking, I don't want to argue with you, and do not want to waste my time to explain the details to you any more. If what I said hurt you and made you unhappy, I'd like to say sorry to y...

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P.S.,Frankly speeking, I don't want to argue with you, and do not want to waste my time to explain the details to you any more. If what I said hurt you and made you unhappy, I'd like to say sorry to you.
Give you a piece of advice, just save your so-called composition, then try your best to study English hard for a period of time. After doing that, you would find out these words and read, you will understand what I firstly meant.
楼上的，你这篇能当错误范文了，没有一句是对的，语法什么的全是错！i服了u！拿第一句来说，
1.题目中的view是指个人的看法，你开头用two different views就不合适，如果你非要这么说，用point或者pointview更合适。
2.issue一般是指很大的观点，大到能上正规刊物的那种，如果是指发生的一种现象就不合适了。
3.of后面不是说学校里的手机，要这么说也是of using mobile phone in our school.题目写的这么明白，都能抄错！
后面错的更离谱。楼主，作文要自己写，大不了写完让大家看看有没需要改的地方，这样征到的答案也是这种，当作业交上去就太经典了！

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