=3=For my next vacation,I want to go to FuJian.FuJian is one of the most beautiful cities in China .I would like to visit Fujian whose weather is warm .And I like places where the people speak chinese .I do not need to have a translator .It also ha
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=3=For my next vacation,I want to go to FuJian.FuJian is one of the most beautiful cities in China .I would like to visit Fujian whose weather is warm .And I like places where the people speak chinese .I do not need to have a translator .It also ha
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For my next vacation,I want to go to FuJian.FuJian is one of the most beautiful cities in China .I would like to visit Fujian whose weather is warm .And I like places where the people speak chinese .I do not need to have a translator .It also has some great sights including WuYI Mountain .And many other beautiful mountains ang islands.It is near the sea .I really hope to see the sea .How great it is!I heard that those people are kind .I would like to visit some places where the people are really friendly.
How about the foods?I wish we can have many different foods.Fujian has many different kinds fishes.I can try having them.
I wish I have a happy vacation I hope that you can go there wish.Do you want to do it
求大神帮忙修改可以加一些描写加一些复合句一些好的句型就是不要让它太单调显得比较有深度
大神们随便修改大概保持原意就行了
=3=For my next vacation,I want to go to FuJian.FuJian is one of the most beautiful cities in China .I would like to visit Fujian whose weather is warm .And I like places where the people speak chinese .I do not need to have a translator .It also ha
所以你要不要深奥的?有词汇量的?还是就要这样的?
太啰嗦,需要整体上大改!~~改吧!When talking of my next vacation,Travelling to Fujian is my dreaming about . As one of the most beautiful provinces in China ,Fujian is well-known for its natuarl scenery .Among the ...
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