To make his dream come true,Tom becomes very interested in business.这句话中“To make his dream come true”可否换成“In order to make his dream come true”或“In order that he make his dream come true”.

To make his dream come true,Tom becomes very interested in business.这句话中“To make his dream come true”可否换成“In order to make his dream come true”或“In order that he make his dream come true”.
To make his dream come true,Tom becomes very interested in business.这句话中“To make his dream come true”可否换成“In order to make his dream come true”或“In order that he make his dream come true”.

To make his dream come true,Tom becomes very interested in business.这句话中“To make his dream come true”可否换成“In order to make his dream come true”或“In order that he make his dream come true”.
最后一句似乎需要更正一下?
也许“In order that he can make his dream come true”更好?

最后一个的语态要改下吧？！~~~