帮忙检查一下英语短文有没有错Nowadays,with the rapid developmentof economy,The output of China-made products has topped the world's list .On one hand ,it shows that Chinese goods enjoy a greatpopularity in world market .as aleading expor

帮忙检查一下英语短文有没有错Nowadays,with the rapid developmentof economy,The output of China-made products has topped the world's list .On one hand ,it shows that Chinese goods enjoy a greatpopularity in world market .as aleading expor
帮忙检查一下英语短文有没有错
Nowadays,with the rapid developmentof economy,
The output of China-made products has topped the world's list .
On one hand ,it shows that Chinese goods enjoy a greatpopularity in world market .as aleading exporter,Chinaplays an important role in the global economy
On theother hand,we can not negelect the fact that the products we produce are lowin quality and copycat low-cost production.
As faras I am concerned,innovation is extremelyurgent.
With brand identity and technology,china’screative industries will blossom and give china the cutting edge in the fierceglobal competition.
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帮忙检查一下英语短文有没有错Nowadays,with the rapid developmentof economy,The output of China-made products has topped the world's list .On one hand ,it shows that Chinese goods enjoy a greatpopularity in world market .as aleading expor
第一行,of和development之间有空格,你没留空格
第三行,Chinese goods enjoy的enjoy应该是enjoys,这个是我的想法,中国货物是总称,应该是单数名词.a greatpopularity 中的great 和popularity空格没留.后面的as应该As,exporter应该是exported.
第四行,Chinaplays 中还是空格问题,应该是China plays.然后就是n the global economy后面少了一个句号（英文句号.）
第五行,he products we produce 应该是he products we produced
第七行,还是空格问题,As faras应该是As far as
第八行,空格问题,china’screative应该是china’s creative
第九行,空格问题,in the fierceglobal应该是in the fierce global
我认真了看了你的所有问题,希望可以帮你!