帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!My hometown is FoShan .As we know ,it is a big ctiy ,and it has a large population . SO far in 2008 ,it is about 6 million . Besides that ,FoShan is a famous hometown of

帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!My hometown is FoShan .As we know ,it is a big ctiy ,and it has a large population . SO far in 2008 ,it is about 6 million . Besides that ,FoShan is a famous hometown of
帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗
语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!
My hometown is FoShan .As we know ,it is a big ctiy ,and it has a large population . SO far in 2008 ,it is about 6 million . Besides that ,FoShan is a famous hometown of overseas chinese, and it has a long history.
If you want to have visit , you can come all year around , because the weather there is very warm. And FoShan has some especial bus which go around the city all the time ,and it needs only 2 yuan. So ,the best means of transportation the visitors should use to my city is bus.
And hotels, I think the JinCheng Hotel is good . It is in the center of the city .This is good for your trip , I guess.
Visiting FoShan and I think you shouldn’t miss three places .They are XiQiao Mountain Of NanHai 、Peach Park Of Southland ,and the Jade Hole . XiQiao Mountain is the most beautiful place in my hometown. It is said that it came from the sea long long ago .It is exciting that there are 28 waterfalls .It is so cool . And XiQiao big cake is very famous there. It is yummy and it is funny .We can buy some for our friends as presents .
Talking about the food, Cake Of Blinds 、GaoMing Lychee are very good presents .In the restaurant , ZhuHou Chicken 、MaChe Dog Meat are the famous main dishes in FoShan .
I hope you can come to my hometown.

帮我看看这段英文有错误的地方吗语法有错误的请告知,谢谢!My hometown is FoShan .As we know ,it is a big ctiy ,and it has a large population . SO far in 2008 ,it is about 6 million . Besides that ,FoShan is a famous hometown of
1）It is a bout 6 million peoples at here.2) Foshan is a famous hometown in the overseas of China.3) If you want to have a visit,you can come here anytime of the year.4) Because the weather of here is very warm.5) And there are some bus here provide especial service that you can go around the city by bus in all day.6) and it cost only 2 yuan (or the expense is only 2 yuan) 7)So the best way for the visitors is to sit in the bus to vist my city.8)And for hotels.It is good help for your trip.I think.9) I don't think you should miss the three places if you want to visit Foshan.10) And XiQiao big cake is also very famous at here.