please come Last summer I went to Hangzhou by coach in order to visit my pen pal——Yoyo,a lovely and smart girl.The place appointed for the appointment was Wushan square.And she said that she was very pleased to be my guide and she would show me a

please come Last summer I went to Hangzhou by coach in order to visit my pen pal——Yoyo,a lovely and smart girl.The place appointed for the appointment was Wushan square.And she said that she was very pleased to be my guide and she would show me a
please come
Last summer I went to Hangzhou by coach in order to visit my pen pal——Yoyo,a lovely and smart girl.The place appointed for the appointment was Wushan square.And she said that she was very pleased to be my guide and she would show me around her hometown.So how much I expected to meet her!But unluckily,there were too many people and I was strange to the city so I had lost the way!So there was no choice,I started to go walking around without a destination.Suddenly,a girl dressed in red appeared in front of me,she was middle height with a pair of glassed……Oh,my dear!She was just my pen pal.We were both surprised at first.But a few seconds later,we smiled and came closer.Then the trip was really started……
饿.-1帮忙修改下语法错误,顺便给点建议`呜.一个寒假米碰英语勒...脑袋都锈逗了.
3Q～
a pair of glassed——》a pair of glasses 饿-，-失误`咳……

please come Last summer I went to Hangzhou by coach in order to visit my pen pal——Yoyo,a lovely and smart girl.The place appointed for the appointment was Wushan square.And she said that she was very pleased to be my guide and she would show me a
Last summer I went to Hangzhou by coach to visit my pen pal,whose name is Yoyo,a lovely and smart girl.The place appointed was Wushan Square.And she said that she would be very pleased to be my guide to show me around her hometown.How much I expected to meet her!Unluckily,since the city was so crowded,as a stanger to the city,I lost my way.As a result,I started to walk around without a goal.Suddenly,a girl in red appeared.She was middle height with a pair of glasses.Oh,my God!She was just my pen pal.We all felt surprised at first.But a few seconds later,we smiled and came closer.Then the trip really started……
动词杂乱,且记住一个句子只有一个动词.我改了一下.应该没问题了.

pen pal+friend
So there was no choice树不搭配吧
started to go walking around without 去掉GO
glassed拼错了