It is universally acknowledged that whatever you are doing,focus on being 100% present.Multitasking is impossible anyway.It has never escaped my mind that when i was a middle school student ,a classmate of mine used to get good grades in our class,bu

It is universally acknowledged that whatever you are doing,focus on being 100% present.Multitasking is impossible anyway.It has never escaped my mind that when i was a middle school student ,a classmate of mine used to get good grades in our class,bu
It is universally acknowledged that whatever you are doing,focus on being 100% present.Multitasking is impossible anyway.
It has never escaped my mind that when i was a middle school student ,a classmate of mine used to get good grades in our class,but he liked reading novels.every day after he finished his homework,he spend the rest of the day on read novels or watching TV.Our teacher persuaded him not to do that or he must fail in the next exam .But that student still ignored the teacher.As time went by ,he still studying while playing.Finally he didn't get good grades in the exam.
From that example ,we can learn that keep all of your heart on what you are doing,or you can't success .And please believe that where is the will ,where is the way.

It is universally acknowledged that whatever you are doing,focus on being 100% present.Multitasking is impossible anyway.It has never escaped my mind that when i was a middle school student ,a classmate of mine used to get good grades in our class,bu
whatever you are doing, focus on being 100% present是句病句,你翻译下就不通,别用chinglish,百分比拼错（打错）
a classmate of mine used to get good grades in our class,but he liked reading novels.这句逻辑有问题,前后没有转折还用but?
Everyday 后跟 finished?时态错误
he spends/spent
on reading不是on read
……
看了遍全文,错误太多.你的语法不好啊,要改的地方太多了.另外这篇作文题目是什么?不知道主题的话,没法看你有没有偏题,或者立意错误.
要改的话找我私聊吧.
有不理解可以追问.

It is universally acknowledged that whatever you're doing, you should be 100% devoted to it. I think multitasking is somehow impossible.
I've never forgotten that there was a boy named Mike in...

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It is universally acknowledged that whatever you're doing, you should be 100% devoted to it. I think multitasking is somehow impossible.
I've never forgotten that there was a boy named Mike in my middle school, who used to obtain great grades in our class, but then he began to read novels every day after finishing his homework and spent a lot of his leisure time on watching TV. Although our teacher tried to persuade him not to do so and warn him that if he continued, he would fail in the next exam, he still didn't take it serious. And finally, as the teacher said, he failed in the following exam.
From this example, we can learn that we should be concentrated on what we are doing, or we won't succeed. And please believe that where there is a will, there's a way.

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