高中英语改错急!i still remember the morning.my father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy,for we were going to get the book .when\x0cwe drove to the bookstore,many people were alre

高中英语改错急!i still remember the morning.my father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy,for we were going to get the book .when\x0cwe drove to the bookstore,many people were alre
高中英语改错急!
i still remember the morning.my father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy,for we were going to get the book .when\x0cwe drove to the bookstore,many people were alread watiting there.we waited for our turn at about 8:30.i was overjoyed when i got the book,not only because of the book themselves,but also of the love from my father.never before had i feel such a love from him,because of my father,i believed then,had alway busy with his own work.that was“harry potter”that helped i feel the deep love from my parents.一共有十处错误!有些应该大写的由于时间关系没大写!那不算错误!

高中英语改错急!i still remember the morning.my father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy,for we were going to get the book .when\x0cwe drove to the bookstore,many people were alre
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i still remember that morning.my father woke me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out of bed surprised and was extremely happy,for we were going to get the book .when we arrived at the bo...

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i still remember that morning.my father woke me up at about 5 and sky was still gray.i jumped out of bed surprised and was extremely happy,for we were going to get the book .when we arrived at the bookstore,many people were alread waiting there.we waited for our turn till about 8:30. i was overjoyed when i got the book,not only because of the book themselves,but also of the love from my father.never before had i felt such love from him,because of my father,i believed then,had alway been busy with his own work.that was“harry potter”that helped i feel the deep love from my

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the morning- that morning
jumped out- does mean be highly noticeable,so how about got up!
I got up and feel surpised and exremely happy,
(why)for You are going to get the book which you wa...

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the morning- that morning
jumped out- does mean be highly noticeable,so how about got up!
I got up and feel surpised and exremely happy,
(why)for You are going to get the book which you want to have one,
so, perhaps you need a conjunction here.I got up and feel suprised and extreme happy that we are going to get the book,
when I got there, there was so many people waitting for get the book,,
I was in high when I get that.
books itselves,book itself
and the love that from father as well,
I have never felt such a love from him before.
cause of my father, he had always busy with his work,
I believed that was the book harry potter helped me feel the love father give me!
still,I remember that morning.suddenly, my father wake me up at around 5, and outside was gray,still.I got up and surprised and extreme happy that we are going to get the book .when we drove to the bookstore,there are many people were watiting...we waited for our turn to at 8:30. I was in high when I got it,not only because of the book itself,and the love that from my father as well,I have never felt such a love from him before,I believed that cause of the book harry potter helped me feel the love father give me!

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remember->remembering
sky-》the sky
surprised->surprising
extreme-> extremely
but also后的of去掉
i->me
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