he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!

he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!
he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!

he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!
两句话之间没有逻辑关系.应该改一下,比如改成：He looked worried when he had lost his way.

迷路不用过去完成时，用过去式即可。可以改成：“he lost his way,looked worried.”

以下三句都是正确的,仔细阅读，你就知道错误在哪里：
1 He had lost his way and looked worried.-------简单句，用and连接
2 He had lost his way, looking worried.-------分词结构，没有and
3 Having lost his way, he looked worried. --------用完成式的分词结构，没有and