这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.有错的或者不恰当的吗?

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这句话对吗?Thanksforyourconcern.It''sagreathonortobeanemployee.Thanksforyourconcern.It''sagreathonortobeane

这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.有错的或者不恰当的吗?
这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.
Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.
有错的或者不恰当的吗?

这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.有错的或者不恰当的吗?
感觉是正是信函用,honor 后面最好加个for me
value最好加s 然后把for 改成 to
其他都很好啊

我觉得第二句话可以改改
It's my great honor to be an employee here.

改成 create benefits比较好

没什么错。就是最好改It's my great honor to be a member of this enterprise..