英语翻译I prefer to shopping online to shopping rather than in department store,because the former is most convenient and saving time.我宁愿网上购物也不愿意在百货商场购物,因为那里更方便省时.首先这句存在错误么,

英语翻译I prefer to shopping online to shopping rather than in department store,because the former is most convenient and saving time.我宁愿网上购物也不愿意在百货商场购物,因为那里更方便省时.首先这句存在错误么,
英语翻译
I prefer to shopping online to shopping rather than in department store,because the former is most convenient and saving time.我宁愿网上购物也不愿意在百货商场购物,因为那里更方便省时.首先这句存在错误么,再者怎么简短的翻译这句话

英语翻译I prefer to shopping online to shopping rather than in department store,because the former is most convenient and saving time.我宁愿网上购物也不愿意在百货商场购物,因为那里更方便省时.首先这句存在错误么,
存在些小错误, prefer to 与 rather than 重复了,意思也不大一样,
可以这么说：
1、I prefer （这里的to应该放在后面,要去掉） shopping online to shopping in department store,because It will be more convenient and save more time.
或者：
2、I’d rather shopping online than shopping in department store,because It will be more convenient and save more time.
翻译的话可以翻译成：
1、比起去百货商店买东西我更喜欢网购,因为这样更便捷省时.
2、我宁愿网购也不想去百货商店买东西,因为这样更便捷省时.