for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother有没有语法错误For he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.For he who today sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.这俩句那个对啊那为什么第一句是

for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother有没有语法错误For he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.For he who today sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.这俩句那个对啊那为什么第一句是
for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother有没有语法错误
For he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.
For he who today sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.
这俩句那个对啊
那为什么第一句是错的谢谢
he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.

for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother有没有语法错误For he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.For he who today sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.这俩句那个对啊那为什么第一句是
who 要与先行词he紧连才能表示其代指的是 he 而不是 today

第二句对

这貌似不是一个完整的句子吧。for开头？至于顺序我觉得两者都可以。