Please help to find the errors.Aug 10 2009 Mon FineThe sunshine through the window when I undrawd the curtain.A new day has come.Opend the computer,looked over my mailbox still had no good news.It's mean that I have no job as before.I watched TV all
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Please help to find the errors.Aug 10 2009 Mon FineThe sunshine through the window when I undrawd the curtain.A new day has come.Opend the computer,looked over my mailbox still had no good news.It's mean that I have no job as before.I watched TV all
Please help to find the errors.
Aug 10 2009 Mon Fine
The sunshine through the window when I undrawd the curtain.A new day has come.Opend the computer,looked over my mailbox still had no good news.It's mean that I have no job as before.I watched TV all the day.With my friend went to the supermarket in the night,bought a bottle of vegoil a bottle of coke and a sack of sunflower seeds.The time was 8 when we go home .After bathed ,I begun to write my diary.
BadBoy.
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Please help to find the errors.Aug 10 2009 Mon FineThe sunshine through the window when I undrawd the curtain.A new day has come.Opend the computer,looked over my mailbox still had no good news.It's mean that I have no job as before.I watched TV all
第一句没有谓语,可为the sunshine went in…… 第二句应为过去式had 第三句没主语,句式杂糅I opend…and lookd…,it still had… 第四句be动词(am is are)也是动词,后面不能跟动词原形,改为it means,而且要用过去式had 第五句没什么 第六句:还是少主语,改为I went to…with my…,and i ……或者是…,buying…后面的是状语从句
第七句went home 第八句:bath能不能用作动词我不知道了,但我觉得after taking a bath好点;begin过去式写错了,应是began 本人只能帮到这样了 英语是个循序渐进的东西,要从基本地学起,不要总想用复杂的长句子 愿你英语水平可以长足进步 用手机打这么多用了30分钟,累啊