短文改错Last summer vacation,I worked as avolunteer in ahospital,which Imet a little girl,Xiaoxiao,who is only seven years old,Ahe just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time.I was amazed by her courage because she n
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短文改错Last summer vacation,I worked as avolunteer in ahospital,which Imet a little girl,Xiaoxiao,who is only seven years old,Ahe just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time.I was amazed by her courage because she n
短文改错Last summer vacation,I worked as avolunteer in ahospital,which Imet a little girl,Xiaoxiao,who is only seven years old,Ahe just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time.I was amazed by her courage because she never cried even ad shewas suffering a lot of pain.I once noticed her helping a little boy which parents couldn't come tu see him that day.She was sharing her sweets and toys for the boy and telling stories to calm her down.Soon the boy stopped crying,I wondered many grownups could be as kind as she was to other!
短文改错Last summer vacation,I worked as avolunteer in ahospital,which Imet a little girl,Xiaoxiao,who is only seven years old,Ahe just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time.I was amazed by her courage because she n
我试试哈,肯定改不完
1第一句which改为where
2Ahe应该打错了吧,是什么?
3but had to stay in the bed,but改为and
4stay in the bed for some time,我觉得应该不要the
5I once noticed her helping a little boy which parents couldn't come tu see him that day.her改为she,which改为 whose
6She was sharing her sweets and toys for the boy .for改为with
7and telling stories to calm her down.her改为him
8I wondered many grownups could be as kind as she was to other!wondered后面加if
只发现这些,检查下还有没有吧