英语改错题.I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am g

英语改错题.I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am g
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I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am getting the better all the time.We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills.Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city,and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes.
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英语改错题.I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am g
1.第一行中：have been planning 改为plan,因为表示将来的意思,不用完成时
2.第二行中：as more time as 改为 as much time as,as...as当中有形容词原形
3.第二行中：who likes to play 改为who like to play,who引导的这个定语从句的先行词是people,是复数,因此从句谓语不需用第三人称单数形式
4.第三行最后：getting the better 改成getting better,形容词比较级前不加定冠词the
5.第四行中：that play against 改成 that plays against,因为先行词是a team,是第三人称单数,用plays
6.第五行中：rest of us 改成 all of us,他教我们所有人不是教“我们中其余的人”,我应该也在被帮助对象中,所以是我们所有人
7.第五行中：improved 改成 to improve,help sb.(to) do sth.,帮助某人做某事,后面跟动词不定式,可加也可不加to
8.第五行中：tonight we are playing 改成 tonight we will play,今晚的事还未发生,用一般将来时
9.第六行：beat them 改成 beat it,击败的是one of the teams,一支队不是复数
10.最后一行：won't make 改成 don't make

个人意见 ； 第一 全是进行时态，视乎不妥，
第二 as more time 改为much time
第三 other people 是复述 likes改为like
第四 are teaching 改为 一般现在时就OK了
第五 getting better 去掉the ...

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个人意见 ； 第一 全是进行时态，视乎不妥，
第二 as more time 改为much time
第三 other people 是复述 likes改为like
第四 are teaching 改为 一般现在时就OK了
第五 getting better 去掉the
play 改为 plays
the rest of us
improved改为improve
wont 改为dont
总之你这个英语太多毛病，而且很有点中式英语，不地道！找老师或其他同学帮忙写吧！

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I have been planning (planned) to join in our college basketball team next year，so now I am spending (spend) as more (much) time as I can with other people who likes (like) to play.They are teaching ...

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I have been planning (planned) to join in our college basketball team next year，so now I am spending (spend) as more (much) time as I can with other people who likes (like) to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game，and I am getting *the* better all the time.We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.One of my neighbors is helping (the) rest of us improved (to improve) our skills.Tonight we are playing (will play) against one of the best teams in the city，and I think we can beat them if we won't (don’t) make any mistakes.

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