Help to find the errors.Aug 11 2009 Tue FineAll the forenoon I watched TV .I want to become a programmer,but I am very lazy.I always told to my friends that I will work hard .But things go athwart.Now I still spend parents's money.I found that I am v
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Help to find the errors.Aug 11 2009 Tue FineAll the forenoon I watched TV .I want to become a programmer,but I am very lazy.I always told to my friends that I will work hard .But things go athwart.Now I still spend parents's money.I found that I am v
Help to find the errors.
Aug 11 2009 Tue Fine
All the forenoon I watched TV .I want to become a programmer,but I am very lazy.I always told to my friends that I will work hard .But things go athwart.Now I still spend parents's money.I found that I am very bad .A true bad boy."Heaven,I also struggle with the day." is my maxim.I like the money very munch.Everyday I smoked a lot.I think that I can succed if try my best.
写的垃圾 另外指点小弟下学英语的方向.
再帮翻译下 天注定,吾亦与天争.
Help to find the errors.Aug 11 2009 Tue FineAll the forenoon I watched TV .I want to become a programmer,but I am very lazy.I always told to my friends that I will work hard .But things go athwart.Now I still spend parents's money.I found that I am v
翻译：if God predestined my life,I will strive to overcome the problems 我用现代文去翻译了古文 应该是对的
文章瑕疵“ 第二行 ：把go换成went更好 还有parents's 要把最后s去掉
再给你一个建议 文章可以在能力允许的情况下多用从句回答 总是用i开头会显得普通
看过你的文章后觉得你已经发现的学习状态不好 那就从现在开始努力吧
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s去掉