英语两道改错If he will come,please let me know.There won;t be some elephants if we don't protect them.

英语两道改错If he will come,please let me know.There won;t be some elephants if we don't protect them.
英语两道改错
If he will come,please let me know.
There won;t be some elephants if we don't protect them.

英语两道改错If he will come,please let me know.There won;t be some elephants if we don't protect them.
If he will come,please let me know.[will -- comes] if引导的条件状语从句用一般现在时表将来.
There won't be some elephants if we don't protect them.[some -- any] 否定句用any,不能用some

if he comes if引导条件状语从句要用一般现在时表将来时.
2.some->any 否定表示"一些”用any

will come-->comes
some-->any