赠人玫瑰 手有余香的英文Do you know what is 'ESIO TROT'?You must think that this word does not exist.But if you turned it up side down,you can see that it's the word tortoise.This story is about Mr Hoppy,Mrs Silver and a tortoise.Let me int

赠人玫瑰 手有余香的英文Do you know what is 'ESIO TROT'?You must think that this word does not exist.But if you turned it up side down,you can see that it's the word tortoise.This story is about Mr Hoppy,Mrs Silver and a tortoise.Let me int
赠人玫瑰 手有余香的英文
Do you know what is 'ESIO TROT'?You must think that this word does not exist.But if you turned it up side down,you can see that it's the word tortoise.This story is about Mr Hoppy,Mrs Silver and a tortoise.Let me introduce it to you.
Mr Hoppy was a helpful man who lived in a small flat.Mrs Silver was his neighbour.Mrs Silver loves tortoise very much but her tortoise can't grow up.Mr Hoppy wanted to help her but he was very shy.He just told her that if she read ‘ESIO TROT’to her tortoise,the tortoise will grow up faster.
Then Mr Hoppy bought a tortoise which is a little bit bigger than Mrs silver's tortoise and put it in her home instead of the smaller one.Then Mrs silver saw that her tortoise grew up and she was so excited!
Finally,Mrs silver found that this was Mr Hoppy's tortoise.She felt so touch and married with him.
I think this story is very creative and interesting.I have learnt that helping others is good for each other.
不好意思题目搞错了 = =
请大家帮我批改一下这个文章，有什么错处都说一下正确的是啥

赠人玫瑰 手有余香的英文Do you know what is 'ESIO TROT'?You must think that this word does not exist.But if you turned it up side down,you can see that it's the word tortoise.This story is about Mr Hoppy,Mrs Silver and a tortoise.Let me int
Let me introduce it to you.it改成THEM,复数.
He just told her that if she read ‘ESIO TROT’to her tortoise,the tortoise will grow up faster.后面的时态不一致,will改成would.
Finally,Mrs silver found that this was Mr Hoppy's tortoise.this 改成it.
She felt so touch and married with him.touch加ed,married后面不用跟with.
I have learnt that helping others is good for each other.前面帮助的是其他人,并不是特指两个人,所以后面不要说each other.
文章很有趣.

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Do you know what is a ' Esio '? You must think of the word is not exist. But if you turn it upside down, you can see it is a word. This is a story about Mr. Mrs. flowers, silver and a turtle. Let me i...

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Do you know what is a ' Esio '? You must think of the word is not exist. But if you turn it upside down, you can see it is a word. This is a story about Mr. Mrs. flowers, silver and a turtle. Let me introduce you to.
Because he is a helpful person living in a small apartment. MRS silver is his neighbor's wife loves turtle. Silver is very worried about her turtle cannot grow. Mr. Hua tried to help her but he's shy. He told her, if she read Esio trot'to her turtle, turtle will grow up faster.
Then the flower bought a tortoise, the tortoise than Mrs. silver slightly larger, put it in her house. Then silver saw her turtle grew up, she was so excited!
At last, she found the Flower Silver Mr. tortoise. She felt the touch and marry him.
I think this story has touched me.
这样更合乎常理点. 结尾不好

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