谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢The Commander Fort Henry of the FortHenry was very angrily,he accuse Ashley is accomplice.Ashley was Imprisoned for 8hour.Ashleyemploy John for his lawye.Henry Dundas employChief J

谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢The Commander Fort Henry of the FortHenry was very angrily,he accuse Ashley is accomplice.Ashley was Imprisoned for 8hour.Ashleyemploy John for his lawye.Henry Dundas employChief J
谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢
The Commander Fort Henry of the Fort
Henry was very angrily,he accuse Ashley is accomplice.Ashley was Imprisoned for 8
hour.Ashley
employ John for his lawye.
Henry Dundas employ
Chief Justice of Canada Christopher Haig Germain.But in the end,justice is Victory.he strive
for 200 silver dollars as compensation for Ashley.
In the 1844,John
win the election very easy,and he join the legislature.But now,The Western Canada and Eastern Canada fall into conflict.Political activities and Religious bigotry growing more and more.The govement
was overthrown,and the society almost can not develop.But in the 1854 ,Johnjoint Tory,French Canadian moderates and
Baldwin's reformist,and built the new govement.
In 1891,John is
76-year-old,and he face his last election.The last few days of the
election campaign,he get ill very sudden,but he won the victory of the
election.After two months,he
died for apoplexy.after John died

谁能帮我检查这篇英语作文啊,如果无错小弟必有重谢The Commander Fort Henry of the FortHenry was very angrily,he accuse Ashley is accomplice.Ashley was Imprisoned for 8hour.Ashleyemploy John for his lawye.Henry Dundas employChief J
这篇英文作文很乱.我试图帮你把句子整得通顺一点.
Henry was very angry and accused Ashley of being an accomplice.Ashley was imprisoned for eight hours,and she employed John as his lawyer.Henry Dundas employed the Chief Justice of Canada,Christopher Haig Germain.In the end,justice won and John stroved for 200 silver dollars as compensation for Ashley.
In 1844,John won the election very easily and joined the legislature.However,Western Canada and Eastern Canada fell into conflict.Political activities and religious bigotry grew and the government was overthrown; society almost came to a standstill.In 1854,Johnjoint Tory,a French Canadian and Baldwin's reformist,rebuilt the government.
In 1891,John was 76 years old and faced his last election.During the last few days of the election campaign,he got ill very suddenly but he still won the election.Two months later,John died of apoplexy.
现在句子通顺多了,也没有语法错误了.
♥ 自己认真修改的,应该比较地道,

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看看你，写得的中文翻译吧：
指挥官亨堡堡
他很生气，他指责艾希礼是帮凶。艾希礼被关押了8
艾希礼小时。
约翰为他聘请律师。
亨利·邓达斯雇用
加拿大首席大法官克里斯托弗·黑格德。但最终，正义是victory.he努力
200银美元作为补偿，艾希礼。
在1844，约翰
在大选中获胜，很容易，他加入议会。但现在，加拿大西部和加拿大...

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看看你，写得的中文翻译吧：
指挥官亨堡堡
他很生气，他指责艾希礼是帮凶。艾希礼被关押了8
艾希礼小时。
约翰为他聘请律师。
亨利·邓达斯雇用
加拿大首席大法官克里斯托弗·黑格德。但最终，正义是victory.he努力
200银美元作为补偿，艾希礼。
在1844，约翰
在大选中获胜，很容易，他加入议会。但现在，加拿大西部和加拿大东部陷入冲突。政治活动和宗教偏见越来越多的政府。
被推翻，而社会几乎不可能发展。但在1854，johnjoint法语加拿大保守党，温和派和
鲍尔温的改革，并建立新政府。
1891是，约翰
76岁，他面对最后一次竞选。最后几天的
竞选，他生病很突然，但他赢得的胜利
选举的。2个月后，他
死了apoplexy.after约翰去世

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