这篇文章有无语法错误,怎么改?A Great Statesman in My EyesIn my eyes,the greatest statesman would be Chairman Mao.He is not only the greatest statesman,but also a great poet,a great calligrapher,and a great thinker.It is him that ends our

这篇文章有无语法错误,怎么改?A Great Statesman in My EyesIn my eyes,the greatest statesman would be Chairman Mao.He is not only the greatest statesman,but also a great poet,a great calligrapher,and a great thinker.It is him that ends our
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A Great Statesman in My Eyes
In my eyes,the greatest statesman would be Chairman Mao.He is not only the greatest statesman,but also a great poet,a great calligrapher,and a great thinker.It is him that ends our humble history ever since 1840; It is him that each time points out the right direction of our revolution just like a God; It is him that leads our nation to beat the Japanese invaders and the American army and got glorious victories; it is him that establishes the foundation of our republic country; and if you study the history carefully you would find out that every idea (such as “One country,two policies”、“ Chinese characteristic socialism”etc) brought up by Deng Xiaoping has the root that is derived from Mao Zedong.What a great man Mao Zedong is!

这篇文章有无语法错误,怎么改?A Great Statesman in My EyesIn my eyes,the greatest statesman would be Chairman Mao.He is not only the greatest statesman,but also a great poet,a great calligrapher,and a great thinker.It is him that ends our
1.表达“我眼中的伟大领袖”最好用in my views而不是in my eyes
2.It is him that ends...改成 It is him who ends...
3.把描述chairman mao的时态全部改为一般过去时
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A Great Politician to Me
In my point of view, the greatest Politician is Chairman Mao, who is also a great poet, a great calligrapher, and a great thinker. It is him who leaded our revolution that...

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A Great Politician to Me
In my point of view, the greatest Politician is Chairman Mao, who is also a great poet, a great calligrapher, and a great thinker. It is him who leaded our revolution that ended our humble history since 1840; It is him who showed us the right direction through the darkness; It is him who encouraged our nation to beat back Japanese invaders and the American army wit glorious victories; it is him who established the foundation of our republic country. If you study the history carefully you would find out that every country improvement ideas, including “one country, two policies”, “ Chinese characteristic socialism” that were brought up by Deng Xiaoping have the root in Chairman Mao’s theory. What a great man Chairman Mao is!

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