帮我修改我写给我的host family的信!嗯,这是小的不才乱写的.写得不好的地方,给俺改一改.觉得应该补充的地方,给补充补充.还有,比如说可以给写点,我决定要在host family做的事情.....（不要笑我

帮我修改我写给我的host family的信!嗯,这是小的不才乱写的.写得不好的地方,给俺改一改.觉得应该补充的地方,给补充补充.还有,比如说可以给写点,我决定要在host family做的事情.....（不要笑我
帮我修改我写给我的host family的信!
嗯,这是小的不才乱写的.
写得不好的地方,给俺改一改.觉得应该补充的地方,给补充补充.
还有,比如说可以给写点,我决定要在host family做的事情..
...（不要笑我写的太菜...）...
Dear host family
I am glad to spend the 10 month in your home.I excited to visit you.
Let me introduce myself.You can know about more me and bring us closer.
My name is xxx.I live in Japan with my parents.My father is a doctor,and he is studying the Master’s course in psychology.My mother is a nurse.She is reading for the doctor of nursing.My family is amicable.
My father and I have the same hobbies.We like reading book,jogging,listen to music,traveling.I especially like reading science fiction novel.I borrow the books from library every week.And sometimes I take a look at my father’s books on psychology.I often jog with my father around the lake near my house.Now I deeply involved with yoga.I occasionally play basketball alone.(In fact,I never take the shoot in the goal.) My family goes to travel every year,feeling the different culture and enjoying various sceneries.
My mother has persevered to study Japanese at the age of fifteen as me.I learn that I have to keep the things that I decide to do from this.I always do the jigsaw puzzle.And enjoy fit together the last piece of the jigsaw puzzle.I have the passion from the time begin till to last seconds.
I was born in China.I came to Japan when I 12 years old.I stay in here 3 years.I couldn’t speak one word at first when I just came,however I made a lot of friends now.I believe I can launch out into a new life quickly and enjoy it a lot.
I want to live with your family and experience new surroundings.

帮我修改我写给我的host family的信!嗯,这是小的不才乱写的.写得不好的地方,给俺改一改.觉得应该补充的地方,给补充补充.还有,比如说可以给写点,我决定要在host family做的事情.....（不要笑我
帮你改了^^
Dear host family
I am glad I'll spend 10 months with your family. I am excited for the coming visit.
First,let me introduce myself,whicj would make you know more about me and bring us closer.
My name is xxx. I live in Japan with my parents. My father is a doctor, and he is studying the Master’s course in psychology. My mother is a nurse. She is reading for the Doctor of nursing. My family is amicable.
My father and I share the same hobbies. We like reading books, jogging, listen to music, traveling. I especially like reading science fiction novels. I borrow books from library every week. And sometimes I take a look at my father’s books on psychology. I often jog with my father around the lake near my house. Now I deeply involved with yoga. I occasionally play basketball alone. (In fact, I never take the shoot in the goal.) My family goes to travel every year, feeling the different culture and enjoying various sceneries.
My mother has persevered to study Japanese at the age of fifteen as me. I learn that I have to keep the things that I decide to do from this. I always do the jigsaw puzzle. And enjoy fit together the last piece of the jigsaw puzzle. I have the passion from the time begin till to last seconds.
I was born in China. I came to Japan when I 12 years old. I stay in here for 3 years. I couldn’t speak one word at first when I just came, however I made a lot of friends now. I believe I can launch out into a new life quickly and enjoy it a lot.
I'd love to live with your family and experience new surroundings.
写的满好的,一切顺利哦!

Dear host family
I am glad to spend 10 months with you and your family. I am eager for it!
Let me introduce myself. You can know more about me and let us closer.
My name is xxx. I was ...

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Dear host family
I am glad to spend 10 months with you and your family. I am eager for it!
Let me introduce myself. You can know more about me and let us closer.
My name is xxx. I was born in China. I came to Japan when I was 12 years old. I have been here for 3 years. I couldn’t speak one word at first when I just came, however I make a lot of friends now.I live in Japan with my parents. My father is a doctor, and he is studying the Master’s course in psychology. My mother is a nurse. She is studying for the doctor of nursing. My family is amicable.
My father and I have the same hobbies. We like reading books, jogging, listen to music, traveling. I especially like reading science fiction novels. I borrow books from library every week. And sometimes I also have a look at my father’s books on psychology.
I often take a walk with my father around the lake near my house. Now I deeply involved with yoga. I occasionally play basketball alone. (In fact, I never take the shoot in the goal!) My family go to travel every year, and feel the different culture and enjoy various sceneries.
My mother has persevered to study Japanese at the age of fifteen as me. (I know that I have to keep the things that I decide to do from this.）这句没看明白你想说的什么。 （I always do the jigsaw puzzle. And enjoy fit together the last piece of the jigsaw puzzle. I have the passion from the time begin till to last seconds.）不明白。

I want to live with your family and experience new surroundings. I believe I can join in a new life quickly and enjoy it a lot.

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我非常认真地帮你改了改
只发改后的文章好了 你仔细看看哦
希望我的建议有足够的建设性
祝你顺利！
Dear host family
I'm glad that I’ll spend the next 10 months in your family. I'm looking forward to visiting you.
First, let ...

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我非常认真地帮你改了改
只发改后的文章好了 你仔细看看哦
希望我的建议有足够的建设性
祝你顺利！
Dear host family
I'm glad that I’ll spend the next 10 months in your family. I'm looking forward to visiting you.
First, let me introduce myself to you. My name is xxx. I live in Japan with my parents. My father is a doctor, and he is working on his Master’s degree of psychology. My mother is a nurse. She is studying for the doctor of nursing. I have a hardworking and harmonious (amicable) family.
My father and I share the same hobbies. We like reading, jogging, listening to music and traveling. For reading, among all the books, I like science fictions most. I borrow books from the library every week. What’s more, sometimes I’d like to take a look at my father’s psychology books. For exercising, I often jog with my father around the lake near my house. Now I am profoundly addicted to yoga, which is both entertaining and good for health. I occasionally play basketball alone. (In fact, I seldom take the shoot in the goal.) My family goes to travel annually to experience the different culture and enjoying various sceneries.
My mother has persevered in studying Japanese at the age of fifteen. I learn that I have to keep the things that I decide to do from this. I often do the jigsaw puzzle and enjoy fitting together the last piece. I am really passionate in doing this.
I was born in China. I came to Japan when I was 12 years old. I have stayed here for 3 years. I couldn’t speak one single Japanese word when I just came, but I have made great progress and established friendship with many Japanese now. I believe I can launch out into a new life quickly and enjoy it a lot.
Now, I want to live with your family and experience the brand new surroundings. I think I can learn a lot from your culture. Hope we’ll spend a fantastic period of time together! I’m eagerly anticipating the visit to your family!
Best wishes.
Yours, XXX

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