两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等My outlook stories Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage. There was a i

两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等My outlook stories Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage. There was a i
两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等
My outlook stories
Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage.
There was a incident among the competition .After the quarter –final, I clicked on the final list of players with a expectant, nervous heart. Suddenly, a pot of cold water splashed, I was not in the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points ,I thought I’d missed the finals .
As I comfort myself that “focus on participation ” ,the teacher in Organizing Committee called me and told me that I am promotion ,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates , I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it’s hard-won, I will be more hard to return parents’ support, classmates’ encourage and teacher’s belief .

两篇英语稿,求帮忙修改啊、、在线等My outlook stories Hello, everyone, It was the first time that I took part in such a formal competition .After layers of selection, I finally standing in the final stage. There was a i
My outlook stories
Hello,everyone it is the first time that I take part in such a formal competition.After layers of selection,I finally standing in the final stage.
There was an incident between the competition.After the quarter -final,I clicked on the final list of players with an expectant,nervous heart.Suddenly,a pot of cold water splashed,my name was not on the list.
The score of the student who in the bottom of the list is 83.33,just 0.23 points higher than me ,0.23points,I thought I'd miss the finals.
As I comfort myself that "focus on participation "the teacher in organizing committee called me and told me that I am promotion,with just 0.23points gap and the top of candidates,I received the chance to enter the finals.
I treasure this chance because it's hard-won,I will be more hard to return to parents' support,classmates' encouraging and teacher's belief.

请问 这是你写的吗

I will be more hard 改成I'll work harder