这句话对吗 有更好的改法吗When I could read by myself,I was surprised by the way the authors use words to describe a thing which makes it very appealing.

这句话对吗 有更好的改法吗When I could read by myself,I was surprised by the way the authors use words to describe a thing which makes it very appealing. When I came back it is raining 这句话对吗? i watch TV when eatting.这句话表达对吗 .when i was ten.when i was ten years old 这两句话都对吗 when i must be home这句话对吗.课文里是when must i be home. If i were to choose either way i loose.这句话对吗?解释一下,涉及语法更好. 人类认识世界是为了更好的改造世界请注意更好这句话对吗? 英语：请问这句话对吗?有没有更好的说法呢?They think those activities waste their time. I'll beat you up when i come back home.这句话对吗? i often get into trouble when i study english. 这句话对吗? When I was reading a book,I saw somrthing interesting .这句话对吗? 这句话这么说对吗?英语Playing tennis and cello is what I have always been continued to excel.这句话这么说语法对吗?还有更好的表达方式吗? 这句话对吗?英文的I am one of the members of Class 4 Grade 11.（高二四班）还能怎样表达会更好呢? I don't know if i will miss your birthday when you receive this letter 意在表达 .我不知道当你收到这封信的时候你的生日过了没有 ..这麽说对吗 还是有更好的说法 1.he has always worked when i go to see him 2.he is always working when i go to see him.第1句话对吗?这两句话有什么区别,分别强调什么. when i was arrived in shanghai这句话对吗?意思是不是当我来到上海 I want to have a phone..对吗..这句话对吗?我想表达的意思是：我想有一部手机 这句话对吗?如下英语I intended no offence when i said that.I'm not very good at English.