我想申请2012年香港大学的内地招生名额,写了英文的自我简介,需要您的修改意见,时间紧迫,I'm a graduate from the No.1 High School in Xuanhua,the province of Hebei.High school students' three-year schooltime gives me self

我想申请2012年香港大学的内地招生名额,写了英文的自我简介,需要您的修改意见,时间紧迫,I'm a graduate from the No.1 High School in Xuanhua,the province of Hebei.High school students' three-year schooltime gives me self
我想申请2012年香港大学的内地招生名额,写了英文的自我简介,需要您的修改意见,时间紧迫,
I'm a graduate from the No.1 High School in Xuanhua,the province of Hebei.High school students' three-year schooltime gives me self-control,perseverance and self-confidence.At the same time,it makes me form a scientific reasonable and efficient learning method.Those,I think,are the greatest wealth my high school bestowed to me.As for the mark,In my opinion,is the combination of learning ability and good luck.
The University of Hong Kong is the dream of all the exellent students and it's also mine.She is open,inclusive and exellent,containing inherent Chinese and Western culture.I always dream that HKU could become a bridge between me and the world.
As for the curricula which I'm interested in,I choose the Environmental Science as my
first choice,because that I have been concerned about the problem about the relationship between the development of human civilization and the environment for a long time.If I can get the chance of devoting my life to this area,it will be my biggest honor and the fullest life value realization.In the area of computer engineering,although I haven't had further studies about it,I'm interested in it very much.Interest is the best teacher,so I believe that I will not let you down.As for the architecture,I always dream being an outstanding architect like Liang Sicheng and Ieoh Ming Pei.Besides,architectural history and theory also attracte me very much.
The future is always changing,especially youth.No matter what the future holds ,I
hope to have my prime time in HKU.I really hope that the University of Hong Kong can give me a walm embrace making me have the chance of improving myself.
中文版：我是河北省宣化一中的一名毕业生，三年来的高中生活赋予了我自制、坚韧与自信，同时也使我形成并强化了一套科学合理高效的学习方法。这些我认为是高考应试教育体制下给我的真正的财富，而至于分数，则是一个学习能力和一定运气的综合反映。香港大学是所有追求卓越学子的梦想所在，同样也是我的。她开放，包容而卓越，蕴含着中西双璧的文化与知识，我渴望港大能成为连接我与世界的桥梁。在专业选择方面，我将环境科学作为我的第一志愿，这是因为我们人类文明的发展与环境之间的关系一直是我十分关心关注的问题。发展与环境的关系愈加密切，若有机会能将毕生精力致力于此领域的研究，将是我人生价值的最大实现。在计算机工程领域，我虽尚未有深入的研究，但在计算机及新软件的使用有着很强的领悟力和很浓厚的兴趣。兴趣是最好的老师，我坚信若能以此为专业，我的创造与灵感会以知识的充盈为前提而迸发。至于建筑学，我一直梦想成为像梁思成、贝聿铭那样卓越的建筑学家，建筑的历史、原理也深深得吸引着我。
未来瞬息万变，青春尤其如此。无论未来如何，我希望和港大一起走过青春中最美好的时光。希望港大能给我一个温暖的怀抱，让我能获得完善、提高自己的机会。

我想申请2012年香港大学的内地招生名额,写了英文的自我简介,需要您的修改意见,时间紧迫,I'm a graduate from the No.1 High School in Xuanhua,the province of Hebei.High school students' three-year schooltime gives me self
I'm a graduate from Xuanhua No.1 High School in Hebei province. Three years of high school has given me self-control, perseverance and self-confidence.At the same time, it made me develop a scientific, reasonable and efficient learning method.Those, I think, are the greatest wealth my high school bestowed to me.As for the mark, In my opinion, is the combination of learning ability and good luck.
The University of Hong Kong is the dream of all the excellent students and it's also mine.She is open, inclusive and excellent, containing inherent Chinese and Western cultures.I always dream that HKU could become a bridge between me and the world.
As for the curricula which I'm interested in, I choose the Environmental Science as my first choice, because I have been concerned about the question of the relationship between the development of human civilization and the environment for a long time.If I can get the chance to devote my life to this area, it will be my biggest honor and the fullest life value realization.In the area of computer engineering, although I haven't had further studies about it, I'm interested in it very much.Interest is the best teacher, so I believe that I will not let you down.As for the architecture, I always dream being an outstanding architect like Liang Sicheng and Ieoh Ming Pei.Besides, architectural history and theory also attracted me very much.
The future is always changing, especially for the youth. No matter what the future holds, I hope to have my prime time in HKU.I really hope that the University of Hong Kong can give me a warm embrace to make me have the chance to improve.

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