港大的个人简介 急As a mainland student,HKU is a attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attract me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the a

港大的个人简介 急As a mainland student,HKU is a attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attract me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the a
港大的个人简介 急
As a mainland student,HKU is a attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attract me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the advantages of HKU can make its students have a longer view and be more creativity,which will benefit their whole lifes.So I want to be a member of your school,not only improve myself,but also be a part in HKU’s imprsovement.
As for the major,I’d like to choose BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as my first choice,and BBA as the second .The stock market has grow fast these years.I’m interested in economy because my mother joined in it.Since then,I became concern about the
improvement of Chinese financial market .Compared with western countries ,China is still not that mature in the stock market and financial field.So study economy is a good choice for me to help my country and
research what I’m interested interested in .
Concerning about the future,to have health body and soul is my goal.I also want to some achievement in the financial field.I’m looking forward to being admitted by the HKU eagerly.
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港大的个人简介 急As a mainland student,HKU is a attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attract me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the a
As a mainland student,HKU is an attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attracts me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the advantages of HKU can make its students have a longer view and be more creative,which will benefit their whole lives.So I want to be a member of your school,not only to improve myself,but also to be a part in HKU’s improvement.
As for the major,I’d like to choose BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as my first choice,and BBA as the second .The stock market has grown fast these years.I’m interested in economy because my mother joined in it.Since then,I became concerned about the
improvement of Chinese financial market.Compared with western countries ,China is still not that mature in the stock market and financial field.So studying economy is a good choice for me to help my country and
research what I’m interested interested in .
Concerning about the future,to have a health body and a healthy soul is my goal.I also want to have some achievements in the financial field.I’m looking forward to being admitted by the HKU eagerly.
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