英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top

英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top
英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）
Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.
First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,this was the way I fell the most exciting thing.
Arrived at the hotel very late alveady,but I still piayed computer fora while,have a look the news,then sleep ,because tomorrow's activities.
What a funny day.
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英语语法问题,帮忙改下这篇作文（日记）Today our family to go to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,so my mother has put clothes ready.First of all to father and convergence then high sreed to Qingdao after,On the road,I saw a billboard top
Today our family is going to Tsingtao brewstery Festival,and my mother has put clothes ready.
First of all ,my father drave fast to QingDao with us ,which was amazing .On the road,I saw a billboard top write:Japanese get out of Diaoyv lslands,which was the exciting thing i saw.
Arriving at the hotel very late already,I still played computer for a while.Then i had a look at the news and sleep because of tomorrow's activities.
What a fun day!
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Today our family went to Qingtao Brewage Festival,so my mother put on our clothes and went out.First of all we met my father, then we drove fast to Qingdao. On the road, I saw a billboard on which was...

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Today our family went to Qingtao Brewage Festival,so my mother put on our clothes and went out.First of all we met my father, then we drove fast to Qingdao. On the road, I saw a billboard on which was written a sentence:Japanese get out of Diaoyu lslands. This was the most exciting thing I fell.After we arrived at the hotel very late, I played computer for a while,watched the news. We slept early because of tomorrow's activities.
What a funny day.

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