这英语句子是否正确?One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend for advice and then they offer him some and encourage him to the dance party.

这英语句子是否正确?One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend for advice and then they offer him some and encourage him to the dance party.
这英语句子是否正确?
One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend for advice and then they offer him some and encourage him to the dance party.

这英语句子是否正确?One day,Tom got in a trouble and asked his friend for advice and then they offer him some and encourage him to the dance party.
修改后句子：
One day,Tom got in trouble and asked his friend for advice and then he (或her) offered him some and encouraged him to go to the dancing party.
有2个问题：
1、时态不一致：
本段话以过去时为主,所以部分动词需要调整形式.
2、部分短语使用错误：
遇到麻烦：get in trouble 不需要a
3、人称不一致
they 应改为he或her
4、舞会应该是dancing party,且the dancing party前应该加go to

后面也要用过去时的，him后加上go

Tom got into trouble one day and asked his friends for advice. They not only helped Tom but also encouraged him to go to a dance party.
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不对。前边是Friend,然后后边用的是they

One day, Tom got in trouble and asked his friend for advice, then they offer him some and encourage him to attend the dance party.
in trouble 是固定搭配。
语句中出现太多and，应用逗号加以断句。

One day, Tom got in trouble and asked his (friends) for advice and then they offered him some and (encouraged) him to the dance party.

主要考擦的词组有：
陷入困境： get in trouble
提供帮助：offer sb sth
鼓励某人做某事：encourage sb to do sth
另外注意前后时态保持一致

可以修改为：
One day, Tom got in trouble and asked his friends for advice and then...

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主要考擦的词组有：
陷入困境： get in trouble
提供帮助：offer sb sth
鼓励某人做某事：encourage sb to do sth
另外注意前后时态保持一致

可以修改为：
One day, Tom got in trouble and asked his friends for advice and then they offered him some and encouraged him to go to the dancing party

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几处错误如下
One day, Tom got into trouble （固定用法）
and asked his friends（和后面they对应）
for advice and then they offered(时态与前面对应) him some and encouraged (时态与前面对应)
him to go to （缺少动词）the dance(...

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几处错误如下
One day, Tom got into trouble （固定用法）
and asked his friends（和后面they对应）
for advice and then they offered(时态与前面对应) him some and encouraged (时态与前面对应)
him to go to （缺少动词）the dance(直接表示舞会)
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1.Tom got into trouble one day and asked his friends for advice. They helped himmand encouraged him to go to a dance party.
2, One day Tom got into troubleand asked his friends for advice,who helped Tom and encouraged him to go to a dance party.

One day, Tom got in trouble and asked his friends for advice and then they offered him some and encouraged him to go to the dancing party

get in trouble；friend和they不一致；got, asked与offer时态不一致；offer与encourage是否是同等的关系，如果是，则需将offer与encourage的时态同got和asked变成一致；如果不是，则把and改成that; 在the dance party前最好加上表示“参加”或者“去”的动词