请问有什么语法上的问题,Amy think to go abroad for further study ,but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So,she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally,she Live a go

请问有什么语法上的问题,Amy think to go abroad for further study ,but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So,she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally,she Live a go
请问有什么语法上的问题,
Amy think to go abroad for further study ,but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So,she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally,she Live a good life,but she Give up her own ideal.
Amy want to go abroad for further study but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So，she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally，she Live a good life，but she Give up her own ideal.
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请问有什么语法上的问题,Amy think to go abroad for further study ,but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in his mouth.So,she doesn’t choose to go abroad for further study.Instead,she stays in China and finds a job.Finally,she Live a go
时态不对吧 人称要换
think to go 改为 thought about going
in his mouth改为in her mouth
doesn’t 改为 didn't
stays 改为 stayed
finds 改为 found
Live 改为 lived
Give up her own ideal 改为 gave up her own idea
下一篇want改为wanted 其他和上篇一样

want改为wants；his改为her；live改为lives；give改为gives

thinks; her mouth; isn't chosen;lives a good life;

Amy wanted to go abroad for further study ，but she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in her mouth. So，she didn’t choose to go abroad for further study. Instead, she stayed in China and found a job. Finally，she had a good life，but she Gave up her dream.

Amy wants to go abroad for further study ,
but because she wasn‘t born with a silver spoon in her mouth. And she decided not to
go abroad for further study. Instead, she stays at China and takes a job. Finally，she has good life without her own dream .