Once upon a time,an old rich woman left all her property to the person who could answer her question correctly.Her question was this “what is the most important thing for a person who wants to succeed?” To my surprise,the answer was not money,not

Once upon a time,an old rich woman left all her property to the person who could answer her question correctly.Her question was this “what is the most important thing for a person who wants to succeed?” To my surprise,the answer was not money,not
Once upon a time,an old rich woman left all her property to the person who could answer her question correctly.Her question was this “what is the most important thing for a person who wants to succeed?” To my surprise,the answer was not money,not power,not even opportunity,but “ambition”.
Why is ambition so important?A person without ambition is like a near-sighted lion.All the things in the distance appear blurred.No matter how strong it is,it can’t go far.
A lion lives to rule the whole plain.A person must prove that “I am a king here”,at least you are the king of yourself.
Nowadays,the world is very competitive.Even if you get to the top of your own field,there might be still someone better than you.So we have to ask ourselves:what is the proof of success?I believe it is doing something for this world.如何停顿,在哪儿停顿?哪儿要升调那儿要降调?
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Once upon a time,an old rich woman left all her property to the person who could answer her question correctly.Her question was this “what is the most important thing for a person who wants to succeed?” To my surprise,the answer was not money,not
我上学期才选修了公共演讲的课程~
我觉得你选的主题很不错,建议可以用一个调查开场.站上台后,先用视线环视一下大家,微笑,然后打招呼,告诉大家：“在我开始演讲前,想先做个调查,对于上课,大家喜欢亲自前来还是使用学校网上的录像呢?请喜欢亲自前来上课的举下手,好的,请喜欢使用学校网上的录像的同学举下手.”然后,说下大家的举手情况,“我发现大部分/少部分同学喜欢亲自前来上课,而少部分/大部分同学偏好学校网上的录像,而我今天的演讲题目就是.”这样通过举手调查就调动了听众的积极性.嘿嘿,我就不翻译为英文了.我以前演讲就这样做过,效果很好.
楼主在演讲内容上,可以先肯定下使用学校网上recording lecture的好处,然后指出其弊端,提出亲自去上课更好,然后说明理由.最后结尾再号召下同学都亲自去上课就OK啦.
至于attention getter,我想了一个：Go school?How about face to face?!
希望我的回答对楼主能有所帮助,预祝楼主演讲成功!

你好！我上学期才选修了公共演讲的课程~
我觉得你选的主题很不错，建议可以用一个调查开场。站上台后，先用视线环视一下大家，微笑，然后打招呼，告诉大家：“在我开始演讲前，想先做个调查，对于上课，大家喜欢亲自前来还是使用学校网上的录像呢？请喜欢亲自前来上课的举下手，好的，请喜欢使用学校网上的录像的同学举下手。”然后，说下大家的举手情况，“我发现大部分/少部分同学喜欢亲自前来上课，而少部分/大部分...

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你好！我上学期才选修了公共演讲的课程~
我觉得你选的主题很不错，建议可以用一个调查开场。站上台后，先用视线环视一下大家，微笑，然后打招呼，告诉大家：“在我开始演讲前，想先做个调查，对于上课，大家喜欢亲自前来还是使用学校网上的录像呢？请喜欢亲自前来上课的举下手，好的，请喜欢使用学校网上的录像的同学举下手。”然后，说下大家的举手情况，“我发现大部分/少部分同学喜欢亲自前来上课，而少部分/大部分同学偏好学校网上的录像，而我今天的演讲题目就是。。。”这样通过举手调查就调动了听众的积极性。嘿嘿，我就不翻译为英文了。我以前演讲就这样做过，效果很好。
楼主在演讲内容上，可以先肯定下使用学校网上recording lecture的好处，然后指出其弊端，提出亲自去上课更好，然后说明理由。最后结尾再号召下同学都亲自去上课就OK啦。
至于attention getter，我想了一个：Go school? How about face to face？！
希望我的回答对楼主能有所帮助，预祝楼主演讲成功！

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