挑挑有没语法错误This article consists of four chapters. Chapter one gives a brief introduction to the writing background and main plot of The Old Man and the Sea. Chapter Two focuses on the image analysis of the tough man in The Old Man and t

挑挑有没语法错误This article consists of four chapters. Chapter one gives a brief introduction to the writing background and main plot of The Old Man and the Sea. Chapter Two focuses on the image analysis of the tough man in The Old Man and t
挑挑有没语法错误
This article consists of four chapters. Chapter one gives a brief introduction to the writing background and main plot of The Old Man and the Sea. Chapter Two focuses on the image analysis of the tough man in The Old Man and the Sea. The tough image analyzed from loneliness, optimism, failure, self-confidence and hope of Santiago. Chapter Three reveals the root of the tough image by analyzing Hemingway’s lifetime. Chapter Five serves as a conclusion. It elaborates the significance of the tough image modeled by Hemingway.
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挑挑有没语法错误This article consists of four chapters. Chapter one gives a brief introduction to the writing background and main plot of The Old Man and the Sea. Chapter Two focuses on the image analysis of the tough man in The Old Man and t
通篇有些啰嗦和重复,句式单一死板,我帮你修改一下,希望对你有用.
This article consists of four chapters.Chapter one briefly introduces the writing background and main plot of The Old Man and the Sea.Chapter Two analyzes the image of a tough man named Santiago in the novel from several perspectives such as his loneliness,optimism,failure,self-confidence and hope.Chapter Three reveals the origin of the tough image by analyzing the author’s own life.Chapter Five serves as a conclusion,elaborating the significance of the tough image modeled by Hemingway.

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analyzed from loneliness/ analyzed the loneliness
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the root/ the reason / the origin

The tough image analyzed from loneliness, optimism, failure, self-confidence and hope of Santiago.
仅从语法上说，我想问你这里是想用被动语态吗？漏了 is
is analyzed from
其他地方未找到语法错误啦。文章可以多用些句型。加油！
另外，be analyze...

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The tough image analyzed from loneliness, optimism, failure, self-confidence and hope of Santiago.
仅从语法上说，我想问你这里是想用被动语态吗？漏了 is
is analyzed from
其他地方未找到语法错误啦。文章可以多用些句型。加油！
另外，be analyzed from 是从……方面来分析，如果是想表达“展示了Santiago孤单、乐观、失败、自信与希望的形象”，我觉得这样说也不错
It represents the loneliness, optimism, failure, self-confidence and hope deep in the old man's heart.

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有一处…“The tough image analyzed from…”这句话没有谓语 analyze为及物动词 应根据意思做适当修改