我要写一篇200字的英语文章 写我的偶像 大概要写点什么 开头怎么写

我要写一篇200字的英语文章 写我的偶像 大概要写点什么 开头怎么写
我要写一篇200字的英语文章 写我的偶像 大概要写点什么 开头怎么写

我要写一篇200字的英语文章 写我的偶像 大概要写点什么 开头怎么写
楼上的原文,语法错误很多（特别是单复数情况）,中文部分是用翻译器翻得
我觉得my idol可以写的内容很多.
首先,开篇介绍你的偶像是谁.(who)
其次,阐述他是个怎样的人,做过哪些事情(how)
然后,自己为什么把他当做偶像,受了他哪些影响.(why)
对于初中生水平来说,这就足够了.我只能给你建议一些思路,偶像是你自己的,只有你自己才明白.

大致可以这样写：
1.简单介绍他的外貌以及基本信息
2.他的成就（毕竟是idol啊）
3.我为什么喜欢他
4.我要如何向他学习（可有可无）
重点在我为什么喜欢他，这个地方的添加许多东西，凑字数
你也可以用HI可我聊一聊~

给你一篇范文，写的很好，中英文对照。
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My Idol
Everybody have their idols, so do I.
My idol is a man, he is a Chinese, he was born in 1967.He is tall and handsome. His name is Vincent Chiao, his Chin...

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给你一篇范文，写的很好，中英文对照。
10楼
My Idol
Everybody have their idols, so do I.
My idol is a man, he is a Chinese, he was born in 1967.He is tall and handsome. His name is Vincent Chiao, his Chinese name is Jiao Enjun.
Vincent was born in , his birthday is on November 7th.He is 180cm tall. His hobby is acting, painting, football, basketball and running. He also likes to watch movie, sing songs and dance. Oh,I forget to tell you, he is an actor. He acts out about 80 movies and TV drama program. He is a film stars.
Do you want to ask me how famous he is? Well…I know that he has lots of fans. The oldest one can be 60 years old and the youngest one maybe is only a baby. I am his biggest fans, of course. I like him very much, and I want to watch all his movies.I like him, because he is so handsome, when I saw him at the first time, I loved him. And then, I began to know more about him.
He acts out many people. And I also like them，such as Yang 戬, he is very intelligent, and he is a great person.He wants to save his sister,so he pretends to be an evil man. （抽吧抽吧）Altough everyone misunderstands him, he never gives up. Finally he saves his sister out.
Sometimes I am worried,because I don’t like the korean stars that my friends like, but then I think I’m wrong. I think Vincent is the best idol in the world. He is very handsome, but he is also strong and hardworking,and that is more important.I heard of his story. When he was 18 years old, he was not famous, and life was very difficult for him, he could only act less important part and got less money. Sometimes he had nothing to eat, and it was very cold in winter. But he always tried his best to act every part well, and finally, he became famous. Even though now he is famous, he is very modest and unassuming,. I think this is very hard to come by a star.
Chasing a good star can give you good influences. Now I love Vincent,so I feel that my life is full of amusement! I want to thank my idol, and I wish more people will love him! Now I want to use a song to show my love to my idol:
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up... to more than I can be.
我的偶像
每个人有自己的偶像，所以不要一
我的偶像是一个人，他是一个华人，他在1967.He出生的高大英俊。他的名字是乔文森特，他的中文名字叫焦浚。
文出生在，他的生日是11月7th.He身高为180cm。他的爱好行事，绘画，足球，篮球和运行。他还喜欢看电影，唱歌，跳舞。哦，我忘了告诉你，他是一个演员。他的行为所左右80部电影和电视剧。他是一个电影明星。
你要问我他是如何著名的？嗯...我知道他有很多的球迷。最古老的可以是60岁，最年轻的也许只是一个婴儿。我是他的球迷，当然。我非常喜欢他，我要看他的所有像他这样的movies.I，因为他是如此英俊，当我看到在第一时间他，我爱他。然后，我开始了解他。
他的行为进行了许多人。而且我也喜欢他们，如杨戬，他非常聪明，他是一个伟大的person.He要保存他的妹妹，所以他假装是一个邪恶的人。（抽吧抽吧）虽然每个人都误解他，他就不会放弃。最后，他节省了他的姐姐了。
有时候，我很担心，因为我不喜欢韩国明星，我的朋友们喜欢，但我想我是错的。我觉得文森特是世界上最好的偶像。他很英俊，但他也很强的勤奋，就是他的故事，听到更多的important.I。当他18岁，他不出名，生活非常困难的他，他只能作为重要组成部分，少了更少的钱。有时候他没有吃，这是非常寒冷的冬天。但他总是尽力采取一切本分，最后，他成为著名。尽管现在他是有名的，他非常谦虚和谦逊。我觉得这是很难得的明星。
追逐一个很好的明星可以给你良好的影响。现在，我爱文，所以我觉得我的生活充满了娱乐！我要感谢我的偶像，我希望更多的人会喜欢他！现在我想用一首歌我爱我的偶像：
你提出我，这样我就可以站在山上;
你提出我，走在惊涛骇浪;
我很强壮，当我在你的肩膀时;
你给我...提出以上我就可以。

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