帮我检查下有没有语法错误中翻英杭州茶文化旅游所具有的独特魅力和特殊功能正吸引着越来越多的游人,但作为茶文化旅游的一个绝好的平台——中国茶叶博览会、西湖龙井开茶节等地方茶

帮我检查下有没有语法错误中翻英杭州茶文化旅游所具有的独特魅力和特殊功能正吸引着越来越多的游人,但作为茶文化旅游的一个绝好的平台——中国茶叶博览会、西湖龙井开茶节等地方茶
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杭州茶文化旅游所具有的独特魅力和特殊功能正吸引着越来越多的游人,但作为茶文化旅游的一个绝好的平台——中国茶叶博览会、西湖龙井开茶节等地方茶叶节庆活动却没能很好地把握机会,这对西湖龙井的名茶形象带来极大的负面影响.同时,茶叶节庆活动的宣传推介缺乏力度,仅仅把茶叶节庆活动当做一个展示性、参观性的活动,缺乏文化性的宣传,没有把地方茶叶节庆活动提升到一个推动杭州旅游业发展的更高文化层次,这大大削弱了茶文化旅游的市场竞争力,也导致了茶文化旅游缺乏较强的吸引力和说服力.
同时,杭州固有的茶文化旅游资源没能得到很好的利用.2005年6月正是杭州旅游的黄金季节,但作为茶故乡的茶叶博物馆几乎没有游客前来参观,许多展厅里甚至没有见到工作人员[2].这样具有历史底蕴的茶文化旅游资源,只在节庆活动时热闹一阵,平时冷冷清清,缺乏宣传力度.
Hangzhou Tea Culture Tourism's unique charm and special features are attracting more and more visitors,but as a tea culture with an excellent platform - China Tea Expo,the West Lake Longjing Tea Festival and so on,failed to grasp the good chance that bring a tremendous negative impact of the image of the West Lake Longjing tea .Meanwhile,the tea festival's marketing lack of intensity,only to tea festive as a display of events,visits of activities,lack of cultural propaganda,not the place to a tea festival in Hangzhou to promote greater cultural tourism development level,which greatly diminishes the tea culture tourism market competitiveness,but also led to a lack of strong tea culture tourist attraction and persuasion.
Meanwhile,the inherent Hangzhou Tea Culture Tourism can not get good use.June 2005 is the golden season of tourism in Hangzhou,the hometown of tea as tea almost no tourists to visit the museum,and many did not even have to see the gallery staff.This historical heritage of tea culture tourism resources,only when the lively burst of festive events,usually deserted,the lack of publicity.
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帮我检查下有没有语法错误中翻英杭州茶文化旅游所具有的独特魅力和特殊功能正吸引着越来越多的游人,但作为茶文化旅游的一个绝好的平台——中国茶叶博览会、西湖龙井开茶节等地方茶
The unique charm and particular features of Tea Cultural Tour in Hangzhou have been attracting more and more visitors. However, as an remarkable platform of Tea Cultural Tour, various tea festivals , such as Chinese Tea Expo and West Lake Longjing Tea Festival, not only failed to make good impact on advertising Tea Culture Tour, but affected the image of West Lake Longjing adversely.
Meanwhile, the tea festivals were not disseminated effectively, but regarded just as exhibiting or visiting activities. Therefore,the lack of publicizing the culture and the failure of lifting the tea festival to the higher cultural level weakened the market competitiveness and attractiveness of Tea Cultural Tour in Hangzhou.
On the other hand, the resource of Tea Cultural Tour in Hangzhou has not been utilized sufficiently. It should have been the golden season for the tour in Hangzhou in Jun, 2005. However, there were few tourists visiting the Tea Museum, the hometown of tea. Moreover, there was no staff in many exhibition halls. In a nutshell, because of the lack of publicity, the remarkable resource of tea culture with rich historic deposit could only contribute to the tour in Hangzhou for a very short time and had little impact for most time every year.