我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~A significant proverb for me~There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more,I don't have a di

我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~A significant proverb for me~There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more,I don't have a di
我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~
A significant proverb for me~
There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more,I don't have a dictionery.
U may amused by this proverb by merely taking the first glimpse.But I think dig out some useful idels and tips from this classical proverb is essential for me.I've to analyse this sentence again and again in order to capture some inspirations though it's a bit tough.
Everyone has his or her own living way and living style.Both of them are protected under the promission of legal.Everbody is living individually but they couldn't be isolated or aparted from the others coz the society is consisted by variouty kinds of inhabitants with deep conjunctions.So conmunication of all aspects in daily life are inevitable,and we must occur that conmunicate efficiently is an goal that we shoul chase after.But not everything could be under your control well,some unpredicted things like obstacles on your way to success.So we must try our best to deal with it well as we can to minimize the negative factors.So we must be frequently immersed in the environment of conmunication.And we must advocate " every day is learning day" I got this form one of my net friends.It's also meanful for me in any cases.We can infer from this saying that in order to cut down some inaccuracy in some unfamiliar situations,we must never stop the steps of studing.
In a man's whole life,he must be involved in much adversities.But how we can defeat them Shall we compromise I'll tell myself instantly - No~Under no circumstanse will I compromise~We must believe that we can overcome all these adversities by keeping faith.Because our motivation are subordinate to our faith.
At last I wanna cite an advertice message - impossible is noting~

我自己写的一篇英语文章,请高手帮我看看哪儿有不妥的地方~A significant proverb for me~There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionery,and what is more,I don't have a di
里面是有不少错,不过1楼改了以后错误就更多了,

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity, because there's no adversity in my dictionary and what is more (furthermore), I don't have a dictionary (ary).
U(You) may (be) amused...

全部展开

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity, because there's no adversity in my dictionary and what is more (furthermore), I don't have a dictionary (ary).
U(You) may (be) amused by this proverb by merely taking the first glimpse. But I think dig(taking) out some useful idels (ideas) and tips (hints) from this classical proverb is essential for me. I've to analyse (analyze/exam) this sentence again and again in order to capture some inspirations though it's a bit (of) tough (hard).
Everyone has his or her own living way and living style (ways of living). Both of them (They are all legal) are protected under the promission of legal. Everbody (Everybody) is living individually but they couldn't be isolated or aparted (apart) from the others coz (because) the society is consisted by variouty (of various) kinds of inhabitants with deep conjunctions(connections). So conmunication (communication) of all aspects in daily life are inevitable, and we must occur (concur) that conmunicate(-ing) efficiently is an (the) goal (so)that we shoul (d) chase after. But not everything could be (well) under your control well, some unpredicted things like obstacles on (in) your way (preventing you form succeed) to success. So we must try our best to deal with it well as (so that) we can to minimize the negative factors(negativities). So we must be frequently immersed in the environment of conmunication (coMmunication). And we must advocate " every day is (a) learning day" ~~ I got this form one of my net friends. It's also (very) mean(ing)ful for me in (m)any cases. We can infer (learn) from this saying that in order to cut down some inaccuracy in some unfamiliar situations, we must never stop the steps of stud(y)ing (stop learning).
In a man's whole life, he must be involved in much (many) adversities. But how (can) we can defeat them ?? Shall(Should) we compromise ?? I'll (I) tell myself instantly - No~~ Under no circumstanse(CE) will I compromise~ We must believe that we can overcome all these adversities by keeping faith. (This is) Because our motivation are subordinate to our faith. (It is contradicting with what you are saying above).
At last ~~ I wanna (want to) cite an advertice (advice) message - impossible is noting~~

收起

U 改成you。最后一段I wanna 后面应该加to,是advertized不是advertice,不是noting是nothing。impossible is nothing完全的中国英语，你是要表达没有不可能吧。英语说法是there is nothing that impossible( to be done)是dictionary不是dictionery
You may (be)...

全部展开

U 改成you。最后一段I wanna 后面应该加to,是advertized不是advertice,不是noting是nothing。impossible is nothing完全的中国英语，你是要表达没有不可能吧。英语说法是there is nothing that impossible( to be done)是dictionary不是dictionery
You may (be) amused by this(the) proverb by(when) merely taking the first glimpse而且为什么觉得这个谚语有趣应该说明一下吧。
我就看了开头和结尾，你如果是高中水平不错，如果大学水平赶快练语法吧。
现在的2楼你站着说话不腰疼，你改个试试啊！再说了，我改的错在哪儿，如果错了我认！

收起

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionary,and what is more, I don't have a dictionary.
You may amused by this proverb from merely ...

全部展开

There is a proverb---I fear nothing in the face of adversity,because there's no adversity in my dictionary,and what is more, I don't have a dictionary.
You may amused by this proverb from merely taking the first glimpse. But I think you dig out some useful ideas and tips from this classic proverb that are essential for me. I've analysed this sentence again and again in order to grasp some inspirations, though it's a bit tough.
Everyone has his or her own way of living and living style. Both of them are protected under the law. Everbody lives as an individual but no one could live isolated or apart from others, because society is consisted of various kinds of inhabitants that share deep connections. So communication, of all aspects in daily life, is inevitable, and we must concur that to communicate effectively is a goal that we should chase after. But not everything can be controlled by you, such as some unpredicted obstacles that impend your way to success. So we must try our best to deal with it as best as we can to minimize the negative effects. We are constantly immersed in the environment of conmunication. We must advocate "every day is learning day", a phrase I got from one of my net friends. It's also meanful for me in many cases. We can infer from this saying that in order to cut down the negative effects of obstacles in unfamiliar situations, we should never stop the steps of studying.
In the span of a lifetime, people will face many adversities. So how do we defeat them?? Shall we compromise in the face of adversity?? I tell myself constantly, no, under no circumstance will I compromise. We must believe that we can overcome all these adversities by having faith, because our motivation is dependent upon our faith.
Lastly, I would like to cite an advertisement message - impossible is nothing.

收起