请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friend and wish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!Like the time unable to turn the clock back,就像时间无法倒流一样,I can not anticipate what will happen tomorrow,我无法预料明天会怎样,So,I

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请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friendandwish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!Likethetimeunabletoturntheclockback,就像时间无法倒流一样,Icannotanti

请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friend and wish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!Like the time unable to turn the clock back,就像时间无法倒流一样,I can not anticipate what will happen tomorrow,我无法预料明天会怎样,So,I
请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friend and wish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!
Like the time unable to turn the clock back,
就像时间无法倒流一样,
I can not anticipate what will happen tomorrow,
我无法预料明天会怎样,
So,I will carefully spend every day,
所以我会用心度过每天,
To be honest,
说实话,
I'm not as good as you imagined,
我并不是你想像中的那么好,
Lost my city is still bustling,
失去了我的城市依旧繁华,
When the lily in full bloom River,
当百合花开满了河畔,
A child suddenly laughed,
一个小孩子突然笑了起来,
That might be me,
那可能就是我,
Pray for you.
在为你祈祷.
Shed at night like a touch of bright,
就像夜晚洒下一抹光亮,
Your arrival ,
你的到来,
Let my heart ever since to rely on,
让我的心中从此有了依靠,
Even if all of the people are gone,
即使所有的人都走了,
I would not be afraid,
我也不会害怕,
Because you always made me feel that,
因为你总让我感到,
You will always appear,
你会随时出现,
When each flower bloom facing the sun,
当每朵花都向阳绽放,
Children enjoy to loudly cry,
孩子们尽情地放声呐喊,
I wish,
我多希望,
We are able to meet there.
我们能够在那儿相聚.

请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friend and wish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!Like the time unable to turn the clock back,就像时间无法倒流一样,I can not anticipate what will happen tomorrow,我无法预料明天会怎样,So,I
立意不是很明确 文采不错 但总觉得内容很空就像是喝了一大杯白开水 中段里面应该稍微修改一下

是朦胧诗么?

很哟才嚒,年轻人。↖(^ω^)↗

整体不错,但有些散,让人摸不准你究竟想表达的感情,另外题目也不太好,不过相对于你的年龄,还是很有才啊,加油!~

请帮忙赏析一下这首英语诗friend and wish(友情与期望),自创,本人15岁!Like the time unable to turn the clock back,就像时间无法倒流一样,I can not anticipate what will happen tomorrow,我无法预料明天会怎样,So,I 请帮忙分析一下这句英语,其中from,by如何理解Zhang has a different way from the other fathers by treaging Tiantian almost like a friend, 请帮忙写一篇以“I have a good friend”为题写一篇英语作文. 这句英语是什么意思?帮忙翻译一下,谢谢Meeting you was fate,becoming your friend was a choice,but falling in love with you was beyonel my wntrol. Going to a Friend's House有谁能帮忙翻译一下 求帮忙赏析一下句子 请帮忙翻译一下这段文章seek balkenes . try inviting friend and business associates ...请帮忙翻译一下这段文章seek balkenes . try inviting friend and business associates from different spheres of y 请帮忙做一下英语单选题 请帮忙翻译一下英语谢谢. 请帮忙看一下这段英文有没有语法错误You will be a good dad.Thank you for telling the truth.I'll love you forever as a friend. 请各位英语大神帮忙改一下这篇英语作文的错误,本人英语不好, My friend has ____ beautiful house A so B such a C such D a such请问这道英语单选选哪个呢?请告知为什么选那项,别的为什么不选?最后还请翻译一下这句话.. 帮忙改一下这篇网上搜来的英语作文!给20财富.My friend I have a good friend.She is a pretty girl.She lives in Jiujiang.She is a middle school student.She has big eyes,a small mouth,a small nose and a round face.She is tall and thin.Sh 初二英语写作给你的朋友写封信,介绍你的生活方式.词数60左右 Dear friend, I have a healthy lifestyle .I ……帮忙写一下 A true friend is a real friend.这句话中true和real分别是什么意思,如何理解,请再具体讲一下true和real的区别. 帮忙赏析一下苏轼的少年游 请帮忙看一下我下面的英语句子正确吗1Abad thing never dies 遗臭万年2Acat may look at the king 人人平等3Acions speak couder than words 事实胜于雄辩4A fall into the pit again in your 吃一堑长一智5A friend in need is a 关于 赋得古原草送别这到底是一首野草颂还是友人离别诗啊?帮忙赏析一下.