I get home,then I cleaning my room and taking on the phone with Sally.这句话哪里错了

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Igethome,thenIcleaningmyroomandtakingonthephonewithSally.这句话哪里错了Igethome,thenIcleaningmyroomandtakin

I get home,then I cleaning my room and taking on the phone with Sally.这句话哪里错了
I get home,then I cleaning my room and taking on the phone with Sally.
这句话哪里错了

I get home,then I cleaning my room and taking on the phone with Sally.这句话哪里错了
时态问题,还有你确定打扫房间和同Sally打电话是同时发生的?
如果是一般时:I get home,then clean my room,(最好加一个after that)I talk on the phone with Sally.这个代表你每天都那么做.如果是两件事情同时发生,I get home,then talk on the phone with Sally while cleaning my room.
如果是过去时:I got home,then cleaned my room,after cleaning my room (或者after I have my room cleaned或者after that),I talked on the phone with Sally.如果两件事情同时发生,I got home,then talked on the phone with Sally while cleaning my room.代表你以前某个时间这么做了