英语作文纠错I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre in last saturday.The photo,fiilled with horror and anger what T was so astonished and sad.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weepin

英语作文纠错I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre in last saturday.The photo,fiilled with horror and anger what T was so astonished and sad.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weepin
英语作文纠错
I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre in last saturday.The photo,fiilled with horror and anger what T was so astonished and sad.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...Over 300000 chinses people were killed!Even when the days are gone fover.W mustn't be forgotten.
我英语很烂···特别是语法,帮忙纠正纠正=
其他问题还有没？语法都对了么？There were many inhuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...这句话我自己写的时候都觉得怪怪的= =没错吗

英语作文纠错I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre in last saturday.The photo,fiilled with horror and anger what T was so astonished and sad.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn down,sime girls were weepin
I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre （去除in,因为表示早中晚或者星期的词放在句末表时间,且这些词前面加this/THAT/LAST等词时,时间前不需要加介词in/on等）last saturday.The photo（复数 photos）,fiilled with horror and anger what（that） T（是I吧） was so astonished and sad（这句话中没有谓语,将",filled with" 改为“are filled with”）.There were many ihuman crimes in the photos.Many houses were burn(用分词形式burnt,) down,sime（smiling微笑着的） girls were weeping,Japanese planes were bombing Chinese cities...Over 300000 chinses（正确写法Chinese）people were killed!Even when（删去when,even足够表达“即使”的意思） the days are gone fover（forever）.(应该用逗号,前面为从句,加上后面的主句才是一个完整的句子)W(We) mustn't be(删除be, 我们不可以忘记,而不是“我们不可以被忘记”) forgotten（forget them）.

last Saturday 貌似是不用加in的
第二句根本没看懂
应该是many houses were burnt down ,因为是被动
如果想要表达在照照片那个时刻的话 应该写成是 were being burnt down
算啦 楼上改完了

I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre last Saturday.The photos,filled with horror and anger,astonished me deeply.There are so many inhuman crimes displayed in those photos:Japanese planes w...

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I visited the exhibition on the Nanjing Massacre last Saturday.The photos,filled with horror and anger,astonished me deeply.There are so many inhuman crimes displayed in those photos:Japanese planes were boming,houses were burnt,children are weeping...the whole city was in ruin,over thirty thousand Chinese citizens were killed!...thoughthe history has gone forever,it should never be forgotten.
我在你原文的基础上做了一些小改动，有些地方你也不是出错，但表达不太通顺，就给你改了，自己对照着看看吧

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