看英语作文有没语法错误l want to be an environment protectorNowadays,The environment is worse and worse.There are a lot of problem on the earth such as water pollution and air pollution.As a human who lives on the earth.,l want to be an env

看英语作文有没语法错误l want to be an environment protectorNowadays,The environment is worse and worse.There are a lot of problem on the earth such as water pollution and air pollution.As a human who lives on the earth.,l want to be an env
看英语作文有没语法错误
l want to be an environment protectorNowadays,The environment is worse and worse.There are a lot of problem on the earth such as water pollution and air pollution.As a human who lives on the earth.,l want to be an environment protector to protect the environment .l will use the cloth bags instead of plastic ones when l go shopping..If l see people who waste water and paper,l will prevent them form doing that.Let’s try our best to make the environment better.

看英语作文有没语法错误l want to be an environment protectorNowadays,The environment is worse and worse.There are a lot of problem on the earth such as water pollution and air pollution.As a human who lives on the earth.,l want to be an env
1.你可以说 is worse than before,这是表示一种状态,但如果你非要说 worse and worse,这就是表示一种逐渐的过程,所以最好说 is getting worse and worse.
2.problem要用复数,这应该是笔误吧.
3.such as 前面最好用一个逗号
4.As a human who lives on the earth 的说法太奇怪了,为啥要“作为一个活在地球上的人”呢?难道以前不是人吗?这话说的太中国口味了,最好避免这样的中式说辞.你只要简单直接的说出你自己的想法就好,所以建议就说 personally.
5.environment protector 就是 the person who protect the environment 的意思,所以你这里太罗嗦了,可以把 to protect the environment 给删掉.
6.prevent...from...不是form,这应该也是手误.语法上不错,但是prevent是“阻止某人做某事”的意思,往往有千方百计采取预防措施或设置障碍去阻止某人或某事的意思,个人感觉用在这里不是很合适,况且人家真要浪费了,你还能真去想方设法的出手阻止吗?还是用劝说不要做比较真实,合乎情理一点.
总体来讲,没有什么太大的语法错误,我稍微润饰和修改一下后,如下：
l want to be an environment protector.Nowadays,our environment is getting worse and worse.There are a lot of problems on the earth,such as water pollution and air pollution.Personally,l want to be an environment protector.l will use the cloth bags instead of the plastic ones when l go shopping.If l see people who waste water and paper,l will try to persuade them out of doing that.Let’s try our best to make our environment better.

a lot of problem改成a lot of problems
l want to be an environment protector to protect the environment 这句显得语义重复
l will use the cloth bags去掉the，泛指cloth bags，不需要定冠词，正如plastic ones没有定冠词
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a lot of problem改成a lot of problems
l want to be an environment protector to protect the environment 这句显得语义重复
l will use the cloth bags去掉the，泛指cloth bags，不需要定冠词，正如plastic ones没有定冠词
If l see people who waste water and paper改成see sb doing 结构，强调要阻止正在发生的事情与下文对应

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