我在申请香港浸会大学,要求用英文填写赴港就读的理由,自己写了篇,希望能帮忙指正The main reason I choose to go to HK to finish my collageis that I have been given thepermit in principlefrom Immigration Department.As we
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我在申请香港浸会大学,要求用英文填写赴港就读的理由,自己写了篇,希望能帮忙指正The main reason I choose to go to HK to finish my collageis that I have been given thepermit in principlefrom Immigration Department.As we
我在申请香港浸会大学,要求用英文填写赴港就读的理由,自己写了篇,希望能帮忙指正
The main reason I choose to go to HK to finish my collageis that I have been given thepermit in principlefrom Immigration Department.As we all know,HK is an area which uses both English and Chinese indaily life.To improve my English level and contact with the international society,I think HK is a good choice for me.HK is also famous for its education.So I wantto get better education in HK,and I want to enter Hong KongBaptistUniversity to have a unforgettablelearning time.
实际上已经拿到了香港移民局的原则性批准了,想在这里提一下,其他的没有语法错误就好,谢过了
我在申请香港浸会大学,要求用英文填写赴港就读的理由,自己写了篇,希望能帮忙指正The main reason I choose to go to HK to finish my collageis that I have been given thepermit in principlefrom Immigration Department.As we
The main reason I why choose Hong Kong to further my study is that I have been given the permit in principle from the Immigration Department.As we all know,HK is a highly bilingual region that both English and Chinese coexist in daily life.To improve my English proficiency and immerse myself in a more international environment,I consider HK as a good choice for me.HK is also famous for its high-level education.Therefore I want to enter the Hong Kong Baptist University to obtain higher education and pursue unforgettable learning experience.
gammar给你改好了...但..= =" 香港移民局的原则性批准你确定要写进去吗?那好像离题了吧
而且完整一点的应该按照以下approach写:
1.为甚麼想去香港
2.为甚麼想去你们学校&这个科系
3.我未来的发展路向和你们科系发展方向的结合=取录我是明智的选择
个人所见,给你参考吧