My funny days as a WeiboerWhen this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest weiboer while I can’t understand what fun it could bring me by sitting by the computer.Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.I came a

My funny days as a WeiboerWhen this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest weiboer while I can’t understand what fun it could bring me by sitting by the computer.Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.I came a
My funny days as a Weiboer
When this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest weiboer while I can’t understand what fun it could bring me by sitting by the computer.
Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.I came across the website ‘sina Weibo’ and sign up for one.With the help of a friend,soon,I was introduced to a big group of classmates and friends.They were thrilled to see me.My being a new born in this special world,they sent necessary and helpful tips to me so that I could be familiar with it in a short time.They were like the elder and I’m the younger.The moment,a sense of happiness hit me as it shows that more than 30guys that were interested at me.
I watch what my friends are doing,what they would like to share,and how they feel as if they were sitting besides me,smiling,shouting,crying,confusing.It is this new technology that makes if possible for us to join hands with whomever we want and every time we feel like.
Once a morning,I was about to go to the bus stop when a stranger stopped me.He asked,’Could you tell me how to get to the Quechao Café?’ Quickly,I pointed the opposite side,but then I burst out laughing,’I’d like to cook one for you!’ Finally,he realized what was wrong and said,’Sorry!I mean,… ,Shangdao Café.’ I picked up my hand phone in no time to record it as a Weibo.It’s great fun to find something amazing and share it.During my trip on the bus,pictures of my friends’ watching my Weibo laughing were flashing in my mind.The sense of humor and happiness was copied 30 to everyone through Weibo.
It is a big scene,where I stand in the centre with all my friends and classmates surrounding me.They are warmth when I was anxious,they are non-tired journalist when I get bored,they are honest audience when I have something to spare,and they are always there on the big scene,Weibo!
主要改一些语法.

My funny days as a WeiboerWhen this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest weiboer while I can’t understand what fun it could bring me by sitting by the computer.Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.I came a
My funny days as a Weiboer
When this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest micro-bloggers while I couldn't understand what fun it could bring to me by sitting by the computer.
Then there was a night when I got nothing to do.I came across the website ‘Sina Micro-blog’ and signed up one.With the help of a friend,soon,I was introduced to a big group of classmates and friends.They were thrilled to see me.My being a new born in this special world,they sent necessary and helpful tips to me so that I could be familiar with it in a short time.They were like the elder and I was the younger.The moment,a sense of happiness,hit me as it showed that more than 30 guys interested at me.
I watched what my friends were doing,what they would like to share,and how they felt as if they were sitting beside me,smiling,shouting,crying,confusing.It was this new technology that made it possible for us to join hands with whomever we wanted and every time we felt like.
Once a morning,I was about to go to the bus stop when a stranger stopped me.He asked,’Could you tell me how to get to the Nestle Café?’ Quickly,I pointed at the opposite side,but then I burst out laughing,’I’d like to cook one for you!’ Finally,he realized what was wrong and said,’Sorry!I mean,… ,U.B.C Café.’ I picked up my hand phone in no time to record it as a micro-blog.It was great fun to find something amazing and shared it.During my trip on the bus,pictures of my friends’ watching my micro-blog laughing were flashed in my mind.The sense of humor and happiness was copied from 30 to everyone through micro-blog.
It is a big scene,where I stand in the centre with all my friends and classmates surrounded me.They are warmth when I am anxious,non-tired journalists when I get bored,honest audience when I have something to share,and always there on the big scene,micro-blog!

Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.
应该是had nothing to do吧
I came across the website ‘sina Weibo’ and sign up for one.
sign要用signed，因为and连接的时态应该是一样的（过去式）
The moment, a sense...

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Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.
应该是had nothing to do吧
I came across the website ‘sina Weibo’ and sign up for one.
sign要用signed，因为and连接的时态应该是一样的（过去式）
The moment, a sense of happiness hit me as it shows that more than 30guys that were interested at me.
I watch what my friends are doing
and how they feel as if they were sitting besides me
还有很多，文中动词的形式都不对……
整篇应该是以过去的时态写的，
但是很多地方动词都没用相应的动词形式，
特别是用and连接的动词错得很明显……
It is this new technology that makes if possible for us to join hands with whomever we want and every time we feel like.
这句翻译中文翻译不过来……特别是that makes if possible for us这里。
我觉得可以改成
It is this new technology that makes chances for us to join hands with whomever we want to meet.
我想问下feel like 啥？
……浅陋意见，希望别介意^ ^

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