短文改错(十处错误)Word came what our chemistry teacher fell ill last week.Since then,she has to stay in hospital,unable give us lessons.Not having seen our teacher for a couple of day,we grew more and more concerned about her.So we pay a

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短文改错(十处错误)Wordcamewhatourchemistryteacherfellilllastweek.Sincethen,shehastostayinhospital,unablegive

短文改错(十处错误)Word came what our chemistry teacher fell ill last week.Since then,she has to stay in hospital,unable give us lessons.Not having seen our teacher for a couple of day,we grew more and more concerned about her.So we pay a
短文改错(十处错误)
Word came what our chemistry teacher fell ill last week.Since then,she has to stay in hospital,unable give us lessons.Not having seen our teacher for a couple of day,we grew more and more concerned about her.So we pay a visit to her in Saturday.On our arrival at the hospital,we found her lay in bed ,thin and tired but smiling.some of them began to weep.However,the teacher inspired us with greatly confidence.I was very touched but made up my mind to deal with all difficulties confidently.I hope our teacher can recover back as soon as possible.

短文改错(十处错误)Word came what our chemistry teacher fell ill last week.Since then,she has to stay in hospital,unable give us lessons.Not having seen our teacher for a couple of day,we grew more and more concerned about her.So we pay a
what---that(同位语从句连词用that)
has---had(时态一致原则)
unable后加to(be unable to do sth固定搭配)
day--days(可数名词用复数)
pay---paid(时态一致原则)
in---on (星期前用on)
lay---lying(lie的逻辑主语是her,所以应该用现在分词)
some of them----Some of us (some 在句首应该大写,them 变us 保持人称一致)
greatly ---great(后面的confidence是名词,应该用形容词修饰)
but---and (在这是顺承关系)

week.Since lessons.Not her.So Saturday.On smiling.some weep.However confidence.I confidently.I

what——that
has——had
unable后加to
day——days
pay——paid
in——on
them——us
greatly——great
but——and
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