托福作文!第一次写,希望大家别笑话!Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At university and college,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.I a

托福作文!第一次写,希望大家别笑话!Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At university and college,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.I a
托福作文!第一次写,希望大家别笑话!
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At university and college,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
I agree.sport and social activity more and more important in our college even more important than our class and libraries.
For one thing,as for Sport.sport,what can exercises student for future succes.students,studying too much,are easily get the ill.students should do enough exercises every day.because exercises can enhance immunity.Study what always cost energy until to ill,so that is why so important to exercises.
For another thing,social activity what is as important as study.Have a good interpersonal relationship is a successful person symbolized.suck like some famous person.The reason why they can be succes because they have a good interpersonal relationship to help them.And a good interpersonal relationship need a lot of social activity to structure.So social activity also a important job.
But some people think students don’t need to social activity they just need care about study.Work and get a good life that is why we need to study.So social activity that can help you get a good job and make more friends to let you feel comfortable in your life.
From what has been discussed above,the conclusion is drawn that sports and social activities are as important as classed and libraries and should receive equal investment.I belive student will be success after school when they exercises and do a lot social activity in the college.

托福作文!第一次写,希望大家别笑话!Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At university and college,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.I a
1、第一段的第一句话,不能就写个i agree.要写的详细,你赞同哪个观点.
2、开头字母大写.你这里面好多字母都没有大写,这个按照错字来算的.
3、很多地方看不懂你要说什么.最好要举例子.
4、总体字数偏少.
5、很多语法错误.
最后能得你的作文再limited那档,10-15分吧