一篇英语作文,请大师评改.我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱My happy National Day Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for

一篇英语作文,请大师评改.我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱My happy National Day Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for
一篇英语作文,请大师评改.
我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We soon became good friends.
At afternoon,My best friend's birthday party will begin.I do not know what gift to send to him.My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.I like my happy National Day!

一篇英语作文,请大师评改.我很用心写的,过去式方面有点乱My happy National Day Today is the first day of the National Day holiday,I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people in the running,then join them.Ran for
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day I got up and did exercise.In the park,I saw two young people running,then join them.Ran for a while,we sat in the chair to rest and chat.We became good friends soon.
My best friend's birthday party began at afternoonn.I did’t know to send to himwhat gift .My sister gave me some good recommendations,she said "You can give him a birthday card,or a pair of sunglasses." I think that gave him a scarf is a good idea,so I bought a scarf to attend his birthday party.
At evening,I sang a song at the party,my friend was very happy.
This is my happy National Day,I can't forget the day.
I like my happy National Day!

把连词改成过去式具体要怎么改？My happy National Day Today was the first day of the National Day holiday, I got up and did exercise。In the park, I saw two young people was running, then I joined them to run f...

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My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day holiday, I got up and did exercise。In the park, I saw two young people running, then I join...

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只是帮你重写修改一下语法 你可以用些深一点的词 LZ几年级
My happy National Day
Today is the first day of the National Day holiday, I got up and did exercise。In the park, I saw two young people running, then I joint them. After we ran for a while, we sat on some chairs to rest and chat. We soon became good friends.
In the afternoon，my best friend's birthday party would begin.I didn't know what to give him. My sister gave me some good recommendations. She said, "You can give him a birthday card or a pair of sunglasses." I thought that giving him a scarf was a good idea, so I bought a scarf and attended his birthday party.

In the evening, I sang a song at the party and my friend was very happy.
This was my happy National Day, I couldn't forget the day.I like my happy National Day！

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